"Look At Me Now"

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=4485971

chorus: Zach Warden
verse1: Troublesome
Verse2: Zach Warden

Conspiracy Theories' up in this bitch!!!


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http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3084450

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3084449

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I've heard this beat before, pretty ill actually. Troublesome, your flows on lock with the beat. Your lyrics are yet hot again. One thing I'm gettin sick of is your same old delivery. I'd like to see you switch ya style a bit more man. Get into a different flow or somin, twist it around a bit like I did on our collabo with PJ or somin. It's a deadly verse though regardless. it's just I been listen to you a lot.
Zach word, I like your hoook man, it's catchy as fuck. I like what you were sayin with it as well. Your flow is pretty good man, def on lock with it. Your lyrics are pretty good too man, I enjoyed how you gave this gangsta beat a twist words.

Overall dope track!

Zach can ya rtf on my track "Bridge City", thanks man dope track!

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you better be good since u got my name and all

ight let me start out talkin on the beat
its ight nuthin that stands out and gets repetitive
but other than that it aint nuthin unstandable

ight 1st verse troublesome:

ur shit was dope...lyrics spoke truth which is #1 must have in rap
feelin ur vioce always u got a good vioce ta deliver wit
flow is completely on point..dont go off even wit one line
lyrics are ight aint bad could be upped but everything can be upped
there's no stopping...but the vocab aint nowhere near basic
good verse

hook: its ight nuthin real catchy
but i like it..better than i can do
i cant do hooks for jack shit
but it was just ight

zach's verse:

u got more emotion than other people i heard
but u can still up that shit cuz its not at the top
the flow is on point and damn i love how u start it
its so dope when the snare stops for that long
it makes people reconize ur flow soo much easier
lyrics were ight..bout same level as troublesome
other than that keep doin it kid..first i heard of ya

there i pretty much covered all the pro's & cons of ur shit
one more con that stood out tho is how it ended
sounds like ya'll didnt care and just faded it out too quick
u should let that shit SLOWLY fade then let it end
its less noticable that ya'll just wanted it ta end it

and zach...props for not makin my name a disgrace
keep droppin ya'll lookin good..i'd give this a 7/10..keep droppin

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Beat is nice, Aint my kinda shit but its cool, suits at the topic.

1st emcee...Nice flow..Swagga is cocky n gully nice...Emotion is straight..Delivery is cool, lyrics are soundin nice man, couple nice quotables onnit..

Hook- Is cool, But simple

2nd emcee...Flow is nice, Emotion cud be touched up a lil, Delivery is cool, Swagga is pritty Cocky man nice feelin that..Lyrics are soundin nice

This was a Straight Track..Keep up the work

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respect ill return tha favour....................................to tha top

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listening


i am liking the opener...verse 1 wow...how true...nice concept on this mayne u got a tight flow and presence on this...aint nothing bad about ur verse...ur highs were a lil too high but it aint hilarious...delivery and quality..i LIKE ur verse...gd job



zach...wow u good!...ur flow was steady mayne,lyrics are cool too...u had some catchy lines...pretty decent job from u too!


hooks...well,there aint nothing special about it...its just iight...flows pretty well with the track...


can i download this?

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