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10-05-06, 01:43 AM
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X Gotz To My Head....Sum hot shit!!!!Check this out yo......
IP: 73B8 65CC
I left feed on : http://community.rapverse.com/showp...227&postcount=9 http://community.rapverse.com/showp...98&postcount=14 X Gotz To My Head (click here) Intro= me.....supposed to be like theres like alot of voices trying to get to my head n shit....like the exstacy effects hook= me verses= all me beat= VtZ productions enjoy thizzz production lol |
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10-05-06, 01:55 AM
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scotia's finest
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IP: EA03 FBCE
listnin.........intros dope...........lol.............
hookz dope......head bumpin type shit........... verse 1.....sickness flows dope.........lyrics r str8 for dis track.........adlibs added madd to it famo.............effects r cool as hell...........hook again head bumpin ish,,,, verse 2........same shit.....illy flow..........deleveryz hot man..........lyrics on pint again....lol been there fam........hook again.......sickness famo........ outro was cool too. hot ish man 9.5/10 great track**puts on ipod**
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10-05-06, 02:25 AM
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Better THAN You!
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*is writing to this beat now.
bitch. lol. Will leave feed in abit.
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10-05-06, 02:46 AM
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Better THAN You!
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IP: AA17 6D82
Okay..
Beat Is hot. I've done established that much. Intro is pretty nice, got kinda long but it was still good for the effect you were looking for. It's blended pretty nicely. Hook is just ill. Lol I'm love it. Threw me off at first with the "X gots to my head" but it was still nice. I'm feeling it. Delivery was one point and lyrics was straight. The flow was nice, just sometimes it seemed off to me a little. But it wasn't really nothing bad. I dunno, maybe I'm hearing things. Second verse i liked better than the first for some reason. I got more into it and felt the whole presense more. But overall its a nice track. Would Bump it. If i could find my ipod to put it on. lol. Good shit. RTF
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10-06-06, 01:58 PM
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IP: AF4F 208C
Word imma hit ur shit When u get home...... Anyways upppin this ish
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10-06-06, 02:15 PM
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IP: 2372 BC06
word that's deadly how you did the intro man. I like how all them voices sound together. The beat kinda doesn't fit your topic but you made it fit in a way. this beat sounds moe like "fighting to survive" type beat, but in a way you made it seem like you are doin that. Your verses are pretty solid, nice flow and the pressence is hot. Like how you worked on them, and ya quality sounds a bit different. It actually sounds better dude. The hook is pretty dope too, I like ya adlibs you did for it. It's catchy and shit, nice job with this track though man. Overall some hot lyrics and a hot topic, I hope you've never really done X.
rtf here please: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235274
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10-06-06, 02:47 PM
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IP: AF4F 208C
I have lol that was my expierence .... X is outta control word but imma check your shit when u get home im at Work on my phone
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10-06-06, 09:49 PM
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IP: 73B8 65CC
upppin.........................
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10-06-06, 11:44 PM
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nice intro, chorus is pretty good. its nothin too complex tho. verse 1 is nice, i like the truth i feel in. flows nice, lyrics are good. i like how it has a story basis. verse2, i like the strong emotional feel to the start. flows an lyrics are good once again. you came very nice on this shit. stay on it.
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10-07-06, 07:50 AM
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...Closer Look...
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IP: 2909 E6FD
Vtz dose have some nice beats mayne!
intro a lil too prolonged..but its iight! ur vocals a lil low... ur had a tight flow...pretty decent! Lyrics..pretty nice!..u had some nice lines in there..i liked the mets and shit in there!...good 1 hooks..yep catchy...i wud learn it to repeat it...nice you had the right emotion on this...YES!.. i'd give u a 9/10 on this one...too much 'fuck..fuck...fuck'..i understand the reason why u used so much but it was a lil excessive.Other than that,u did pretty well...lovely... *downloads*
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10-12-06, 08:30 PM
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IP: 553B 235D
upppinnnnnnnnnn..........
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