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10-14-06, 06:59 AM | #1 | |||||||
I'm Talented.Period.
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"Rhyme Schemes"...yes,your eyes are seeing correctly! NEW Q JOINT!
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^^Click on "Rhyme Schemes" Beat: Mister KA Hook and both verses: Q Concept: I'm just spitting stuff off the top of my head...There's no real theme here...I'm experimenting with flow and rhyme schemes...So, it's basically a braggadocio track. Holla 1 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235928 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235923 |
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10-14-06, 10:24 AM | #2 | |||||||
The Most Feared Gang!
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Listenin'.. yeah i know about ya quality...so I aint gon say nothin'...
Hook: pretty kool...not much 2 say about that.. Verses...rhyme schem is nice, real nice...lyrics good...delivery is nice..flow pretty str8.. wasnt hindenburg a soldier?..or like a boat lol but i see you doing ya school teacher shit on the hook haa word hydrogen... multis was working... yeah quality i knw is bad n u cnt do much about it but still wuda sounded much mroe better with the quality..u shud re record this.. 1 can you rtf please: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...894#post3091894
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10-14-06, 10:28 AM | #3 | |||||||
I'm Talented.Period.
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^^Hindenburg was a big blimp that burned to the ground...
and I'll def. RTF a lil lata 1 |
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10-14-06, 10:30 AM | #4 | |||||||
The Most Feared Gang!
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yeah no doubt Q
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10-14-06, 11:24 AM | #5 | ||||
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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lol at pussy closed line
i totally missed the hook the first time but i like it track was pretty cool overall flow was cool flow was on point
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10-14-06, 01:40 PM | #6 | |||||||
I'm Talented.Period.
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IP: 40C2 F668
preciate the feed
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10-16-06, 05:35 AM | #7 | |||||||
I'm Talented.Period.
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IP: 40C2 F668
uppin
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10-16-06, 01:16 PM | #8 | ||||||
Power Hungry
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a new Q track is up
but I dont see a new zone out and q track up I wonder why? oh, due to procrastination
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10-16-06, 07:25 PM | #9 | ||||
I don't lose
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^ i didnt get that...oh well good shit... you need to get your quality back its hard to listen to....but beneith all that this is something you should re-do when you get quality back its nice....good hook.....n nice flow switches....good shit....really get a set up dog
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10-16-06, 07:38 PM | #10 | ||||||
Power Hungry
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it wasnt meant for YOU to get
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10-16-06, 11:33 PM | #11 | ||||||
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flow switches on pioint sometimes amongst all this souther flow we lose sight of real hip hop and its versitile ways hook sounded solid the quality hampers this a bit gotta get that set up soon ....holla at me good shit
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10-17-06, 08:14 PM | #12 | |||||||
I'm Talented.Period.
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^^thanks man
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10-19-06, 08:08 AM | #13 | ||||||
...Closer Look...
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beat is familiar..its from mr koomak right?
whateva happened to ur delivery?..flow was on point besides ur rhyme switch!..the last hook i think u yelled a lil too much!..u left beat for too long bruh shud have just faded it out..tracks iight tho..
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