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Tears Shade Red...(A Love Story)
1st Verse= Froum 2nd Verse= 'Sylus' ![]() “The man of my dreams waltz right in.. ............While that same man break danced on out” Another lonely day partakes within my love forsaken heart at the edge of my bed where my loneliness is shed squandering, the thought sets the moods loneliness to start emotions of color feeling blue so my tears shade red signifying my heart as if these tears said it all treading in pity, drowning in sorrow find myself lying in the dark crying beyond these walls tiring with unchanged times of today's tomorrow self-esteems consistence none I question it's existence as the reflection off the window supports the allegations seemingly becoming reminiscing of loves twisting positions Believing there's someone for everyone is a falsified statement glancing out the window chanting for when will I find love As I seem to be lost in thought's these feelings have brought For I am truly life's romantic movie as I find I'm love's groupie And the final tear runs down my cheek and drops off “3 Hours later…” I sit patiently, pacing the breathes I’ve taken In a reminder that his love takes my breathe away… But in return I get nothing, fate drifts along in a sea I’ve mistaken False statement love desecrates, like the wind that blows night and day Monologues, I repeat quotes from love semantic presence “O Romeo, O Romeo, were art thou Romeo”…. For I am still in search Fascinations dig with an axle, grinding my emotions to detract my pain Gritting my teeth in tears, O how much this quarreled pain hurts Sundial testaments place its inheritance bold force Breathing within my veins, purging RED mast under my skin Tugs of fear crash and clash; Sedated left bruised in course, Of mustering TEARS, touch ups from this very secluded artistic sin So do I truly deserve this passionate barrier of false love That eats away with every second left for a human being to breathe NO!...I just take in what I can and slowly dilate with above, Asking the lord to take me, while I sit scratching the surface underneath. ![]() As I hold my tears, the closest friends I have, I let go of you and shed tears in memoir of your hatred. To let you go was a gift, I’ve wished for long to have had, I've succeeded, I lay myself to rest in my bed of blood that’s sedated.. “To let it go is a goal.. …..to live happy after that…is a dream”
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I liked this. I could tell that youre used to writing poetry though. Couldnt really catch the flow but i liked your wordplay and vocab. I loved the concept. I also can tell that you got a sick mind. Nice drop.9/10
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thanks man i like it that you alway sactive in this forum homie...in the OM forums son...nice we need more like you!
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