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Old 10-28-06, 09:49 AM   #1
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Exclamation Tears Shade Red

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Tears Shade Red...(A Love Story)




1st Verse= Froum
2nd Verse= 'Sylus'



“The man of my dreams waltz right in..
............While that same man break danced on out”



Another lonely day partakes within my love forsaken heart
at the edge of my bed where my loneliness is shed
squandering, the thought sets the moods loneliness to start
emotions of color feeling blue so my tears shade red
signifying my heart as if these tears said it all
treading in pity, drowning in sorrow
find myself lying in the dark crying beyond these walls
tiring with unchanged times of today's tomorrow
self-esteems consistence none I question it's existence
as the reflection off the window supports the allegations
seemingly becoming reminiscing of loves twisting positions
Believing there's someone for everyone is a falsified statement
glancing out the window chanting for when will I find love
As I seem to be lost in thought's these feelings have brought
For I am truly life's romantic movie as I find I'm love's groupie
And the final tear runs down my cheek and drops off

“3 Hours later…”

I sit patiently, pacing the breathes I’ve taken
In a reminder that his love takes my breathe away…
But in return I get nothing, fate drifts along in a sea I’ve mistaken
False statement love desecrates, like the wind that blows night and day
Monologues, I repeat quotes from love semantic presence
“O Romeo, O Romeo, were art thou Romeo”…. For I am still in search
Fascinations dig with an axle, grinding my emotions to detract my pain
Gritting my teeth in tears, O how much this quarreled pain hurts
Sundial testaments place its inheritance bold force
Breathing within my veins, purging RED mast under my skin
Tugs of fear crash and clash; Sedated left bruised in course,
Of mustering TEARS, touch ups from this very secluded artistic sin
So do I truly deserve this passionate barrier of false love
That eats away with every second left for a human being to breathe
NO!...I just take in what I can and slowly dilate with above,
Asking the lord to take me, while I sit scratching the surface underneath.



As I hold my tears, the closest friends I have,
I let go of you and shed tears in memoir of your hatred.
To let you go was a gift, I’ve wished for long to have had,
I've succeeded, I lay myself to rest in my bed of blood that’s sedated..

“To let it go is a goal..
…..to live happy after that…is a dream”
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Old 10-28-06, 09:55 AM   #2
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Old 10-29-06, 09:56 PM   #3
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I liked this. I could tell that youre used to writing poetry though. Couldnt really catch the flow but i liked your wordplay and vocab. I loved the concept. I also can tell that you got a sick mind. Nice drop.9/10
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Old 10-30-06, 04:35 AM   #4
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thanks man i like it that you alway sactive in this forum homie...in the OM forums son...nice we need more like you!
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