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Old 10-29-06, 10:34 PM   #1
DaTrusHurtz
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Group D: L.I. (0-1) vs. D. Stroyer (0-1)

IP: 2AC9 5FB1

Its week 2 of this 7 week season. Most people voted last week and the number of no-shows wasn't too bad, but the quality of punches needs to go up. Don't rush this battle and drop your hardest. There's a $50 cash prize coming up this season. That $50 won't be yours if you half-ass.

Battler #1: D. Stroyer
Battler #2: L.I.

Battler #1 drops 1 bar due Wednesday night (11:59 pm ET)
Battler #2 drops 2 bars due Thursday night (11:59 pm ET)
Battler #1 drops 1 bar due Friday night (11:59 pm ET)

4 Links in check-in due Sunday afternoon (6:30 pm ET)

Here are a few rules that you SHOULD know already but if not, now you do:
- Feeding is allowed AND encouraged!
- If you sway, you WILL be DQ'ed. There are no second chances.
- Voting rules are enforced. If you dont leave links you'll lose. And remember, all votes must be broken down bar by bar.
- If you havent read the rules yet, do it now.

Good Luck.
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Old 10-30-06, 05:31 PM   #2
L.I.
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Old 10-30-06, 07:33 PM   #3
D.Stroyer
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yea... my check
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Old 11-02-06, 12:14 AM   #4
D.Stroyer
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ur known to brake mirrors, never could get a girl to
N' it's even worse..
... when the bitch in ya sig could barelly stand to look at u
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Old 11-03-06, 02:30 PM   #5
L.I.
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my bad.. a little late

bitch ya shits wack. no real contracts cuz kid is weak
comedy central signed ya. . for being the biggest joke in the league
take this with ease. ill put an end to this gay
so watch me candy just in spirit of recent holiday
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Old 11-04-06, 12:46 AM   #6
D.Stroyer
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haha, a little late, lmao


nigga i'm not buying it, please son i'll throw the hits
n' u being late in just another exuse...
... for u to have more time... only to drop more shit
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Old 11-05-06, 01:48 AM   #7
grams
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ur known to brake mirrors, never could get a girl to
N' it's even worse..
... when the bitch in ya sig could barelly stand to look at u
--this is wack
nigga i'm not buying it, please son i'll throw the hits
n' u being late in just another exuse...
... for u to have more time... only to drop more shit
--this was a decent punch/feed, I felt if it was worded better it could have 'lmao' status



bitch ya shits wack. no real contracts cuz kid is weak
comedy central signed ya. . for being the biggest joke in the league
--this wasnt very good
take this with ease. ill put an end to this gay
so watch me candy just in spirit of recent holiday
--didnt like this either

this battle was weak on both sides

v/dstroyer
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Old 11-05-06, 03:05 AM   #8
Te Ora
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ur known to brake mirrors, never could get a girl to
N' it's even worse..
... when the bitch in ya sig could barelly stand to look at u
u could've used this a lot better
nigga i'm not buying it, please son i'll throw the hits
n' u being late in just another exuse...
... for u to have more time... only to drop more shit
if u'd called his punches "crap" in the set up or something i feel this would've hit better. this was only ever going to be mediocre imo tho.

vs.

bitch ya shits wack. no real contracts cuz kid is weak
comedy central signed ya. . for being the biggest joke in the league
ehh nah
take this with ease. ill put an end to this gay
so watch me candy just in spirit of recent holiday
i dunno.. this could've been alright with different wording.. but it just comes across at lame


v/ d.stroyer. pretty avg battle.. i feel d's lines had more potential so i'm scoring this to him.
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Old 11-05-06, 10:16 AM   #9
Cocaine
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ur known to brake mirrors, never could get a girl to
N' it's even worse..
... when the bitch in ya sig could barelly stand to look at u
wasnt really feeling this..
nigga i'm not buying it, please son i'll throw the hits
n' u being late in just another exuse...
... for u to have more time... only to drop more shit
could've been worded way better.. but OK

vs.

bitch ya shits wack. no real contracts cuz kid is weak
comedy central signed ya. . for being the biggest joke in the league
kinda played
take this with ease. ill put an end to this gay
so watch me candy just in spirit of recent holiday
not feeling this

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Old 11-05-06, 03:16 PM   #10
N.Tavarez
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ur known to brake mirrors, never could get a girl to
N' it's even worse..
... when the bitch in ya sig could barelly stand to look at u
couldve been ill, its ok
nigga i'm not buying it, please son i'll throw the hits
n' u being late in just another exuse...
... for u to have more time... only to drop more shit
lacking a real punch

vs.

bitch ya shits wack. no real contracts cuz kid is weak
comedy central signed ya. . for being the biggest joke in the league
ummm na h not really feeling
take this with ease. ill put an end to this gay
so watch me candy just in spirit of recent holiday
too simple


v/ d.stroyer in a decent battl
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Old 11-05-06, 05:14 PM   #11
TonyTone
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From: Maryland
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both had one wack punch and one decent punch. the 2 i liked from each was D's sig punch and LI's halloween punch so i'll decide off of these 2. LI's punch was sorta simple wordplay, can D? i thnk i've seen something like that before as well on Daubs or somethin like that. D's was witty, LI had that sig since forever n this the first time i've seen a good punch on it

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Old 11-05-06, 06:01 PM   #12
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D. Stroyer
ur known to brake mirrors, never could get a girl to
N' it's even worse..
... when the bitch in ya sig could barelly stand to look at u
Meh, not too bad..
nigga i'm not buying it, please son i'll throw the hits
n' u being late in just another exuse...
... for u to have more time... only to drop more shit
This was whack..

L.I.
bitch ya shits wack. no real contracts cuz kid is weak
comedy central signed ya. . for being the biggest joke in the league
Hahaha, nice.
take this with ease. ill put an end to this gay
so watch me candy just in spirit of recent holiday
This was fuckin' ill.. I don't think people understand the can D/candy wordplay. Sick punch dude..

I thought L.I. owned in this battle.

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Old 11-06-06, 03:50 AM   #13
Possible
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ur known to brake mirrors, never could get a girl to
N' it's even worse..
... when the bitch in ya sig could barelly stand to look at u
IMO puns are getting really played out man. I don't think this was any differant.
nigga i'm not buying it, please son i'll throw the hits
n' u being late in just another exuse...
... for u to have more time... only to drop more shit
Its alright, but at the same time its not really, a weak pun again.

vs.

bitch ya shits wack. no real contracts cuz kid is weak
comedy central signed ya. . for being the biggest joke in the league
Hey, pretty decent punch
take this with ease. ill put an end to this gay
so watch me candy just in spirit of recent holiday
Pretty decnt line here again. The wordplay is cool, perhaps it should go both ways, but its witty.

See, Imma go against the grain and go with L.I. I felt his lines had more potential than D.

V. L.I.
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Old 11-06-06, 02:50 PM   #14
R.Christensen
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d: first punch was horrible with a shit rhyme scheme... just bad
second was bad too... not a good punch, period

LI: shitty first punch... comedy central line? ive seen wayyyyyy better
second punch was cool... I didnt mind it

v/LI
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Old 11-06-06, 05:51 PM   #15
DaTrusHurtz
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D. Stroyer wins, but doesn't post links. L.I. only posted 1 link, but he's exempt as a mod because he only votes in tiebreaking situations.

L.I. WINS 1-1
D. Stroyer LOSES 0-2
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