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11-12-06, 10:53 PM
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On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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Soldier*My Best Song*
IP: 001C 5107
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=4585231
theres the link THIS SHITS FIRE if you want feed leave a link after you leave some "GOOD" feed alllllright verse 1-Me hook-me verse 2- Untamed hook-me yeah this shits hard ==== links -------------- http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237065 ====== http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237018 |
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11-12-06, 11:45 PM
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O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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IP: 7C71 7BD2
Your best song and no replies huh......probably no one wanting to tell you the truth.....lol.
But anyway, this is some pretty nice shit you got here man. Production sounds nice. You get a bit off beat at the very end of the first verse. The hook could stand a bit of layering to separate it from the verses instead of just the pitch of your voice. Second verse sounds like a different voice than the first verse. I wasn't feeling the second verse as much as the first. Hook would really be dope as fuck if you layered it more man.......and it could use a third verse, unless you were waiting for me to rip that shit to threads  Anyway, definitely a nice ass track.....I just wanted to give you some honest feed before the parade of "DAMN THAT'S DOPE" and "NICE TRACK" comments 
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11-12-06, 11:50 PM
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On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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IP: 001C 5107
^^actually i was thinkin about re-doing it cuz that dude thats on the second verse I dont fuck with no more
but yeah...hes wack as hell lol i could get you on the 3rd and final version |
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11-13-06, 12:26 AM
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O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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IP: 7C71 7BD2
word......I didn't think that second dude sounded like you.....lol. Anywho, I'd be down to get on the final version of this
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11-13-06, 12:41 AM
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The Alien Toung
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IP: 6C9D D12E
come ins nice, beats ill...flows kinda weird...not off...just wierd...lyrics is iight...wouldnt say this is ur best song...hooks ill man, like it a lot..........this dude sounds kinda like WC...not feelin the flow, voice is ok....lyrics ehhhhh......not a bad song at all...but i dont think its ur best
rtf http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237094
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11-13-06, 05:49 AM
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IP: 6AEE 1450
word......I didn't think that second dude sounded like he needed to be on this track...u should make it a solo mission soldier
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