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Old 10-14-06, 01:26 AM   #1
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Old 10-14-06, 01:36 AM   #2
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I like the way you combined with that hook added or w/e. I like what your sayin, good topic. True Hip-Hop feel yup I done a track wit trip bout the same deal. Uh Your hook is good nice and soft then the verse hits with emotion deadly. I like the change of pace to the beat. Oh yea and that ebat is good nice shit. Pretty solid track man, I'ma download it haha. Got me trippin after a big session. rtf here http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235833
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Old 10-14-06, 06:53 AM   #3
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What's hot:
Vocal/track quality
delivery/tone
bass in the beat (haha*have a system now*)
Consisteny of energy in the track

What's not:
Common lyrics in spots


Overall:
Very professional sounding track here.



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Old 10-14-06, 12:09 PM   #4
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aight good looks for both of you

once people wake up i'll rtf

Q droppa link if you have somthin

oh yeah,UPPIN BIOTCH
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Old 10-14-06, 05:44 PM   #5
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Quit Sleepin

And Paranoid I"mma Get Your Feed Back After This Madden Tournament I"m Doing!!!!
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Old 10-14-06, 06:02 PM   #6
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shit is nice man........even though like ya flow is same ya aint switch it up......but ya delivery is real nice on here man always feelin da swagga........ya lyrics are nice man......i'm feelin this joint rite here man......

nice track PT......man keep droppen......

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Old 10-15-06, 08:29 AM   #7
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Listenin'...

Intro is nice, I like this...

Beat is ol school..sometimes the drum is soundin like it skipping nah mean?..

PT...verse this is pretty hawt mayne...

I feel the way u switchin the flow that crazy...and u talkin about hiphop in it essence...but it losing it i know what you mean...

flow throughout is hot brotha...delivery is real good..quality is nice fam...

I like how you jus spit it all throughh nah mean... and the hook is dope fam...

feeling this joint right here..

beat not rlly my swag but u rocked this hot..

keep doing ya thing mr PT...

I like ya outro btw, the way u talked it out...

nice shit dawg..

can u rtf

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Old 10-15-06, 02:48 PM   #8
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^i'mma get at you in a min

i'm gonna eat some breakfast lmao
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Old 10-15-06, 07:58 PM   #9
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uppin on this shit dont sleep
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Old 10-15-06, 11:06 PM   #10
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the beat is dope as hell.....flow is def on point....lyrics are up there too....everything i've heard from you has been dope....back to the song....beat fits the subject.....emotion is perfect for this joint....just really feelin this joint fam....good work....9/10

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Old 10-19-06, 12:13 AM   #11
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Old 10-19-06, 03:09 AM   #12
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wow..really feelin this so far......like the message.....flows good....lyrics not super deep but it's tight man....lol...man i do relate to some of it here........real talk here tho pouring your heart out.....good stuff,,,,,nice to see someone be real once in a while...nice track bro

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Old 10-19-06, 07:35 AM   #13
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beat is smooth and just so cool..i liked the intro!..yeah u got a pretty good delivery,flow was just on point and i like switch..lyrics are so damn real and tight cos i'm like in the same situation...hook was iight but ur emotion on it was kinna too soft for the lyrics!...keep it up PT!
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Old 10-19-06, 12:33 PM   #14
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alright if you all got somthin u want me to leave feed on droppa link
Sorry eastsyde i didnt see ur link i'llget on it today when i get home
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Old 10-20-06, 07:39 AM   #15
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