yeerrrr some punchline shizzle i did over a beat i made in like 20 mins haha....

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=4695086

its kinda unfinished, cause i might add one or two things to it but yeerrrr..


links:-
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237065
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237310

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Word man....I'm definitely feeling your beats man. Your accent is kinda thick. Your flow's gotten better than I remember. Quality too. Your accent really kills it for me.....I know that's not a fair statement, but I guess I'm not used to it at all. You'd probably be considered pretty good over in the UK.


Keep droppin those beats though man....lol.

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ayo your beats are always hot like i told u on msn

accent is hard..not too bad though. quality is real good though. lyrics were decent. nothing that stood out too much. hook comes in. lacks energy. that accent kinda sounds cool on the last line of the hook

some of the punchlines are kinda played a little.


overall it was cool. jus the chorus lacked energy

thnks for the feed people, 'ppreciate it

anymore?????????

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i aint like the accent first thought that came to my mind lyrics flow is cool i like it beat is hot tho.....i wish u switched it up n shit cuz flow seems the same through out
hook is ight guess not really my type of a track anyways overall it was coo stay up return the favor on who we b

Shit when did you get back guy you still got our track...

Not a big fan of the beat but your flow is pretty on man...
stilts punchline...
Hey you stole my lepracy punchline.....lmao
Ok, you're working the accent...
Comedians and no joke

Ok this track was ok to me but it didn't set my pants on fire or nothing. Lyrics weren't alll that to me but your flow was dope. Yup Yup....

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Listenin....yeah accent a putting off a lil however u from the uk sound good..ya quality is nice..ya flow is nice....beat is nice...punches are hot..im feeling this b....aint in the game like the referee...hook is pretty koo i like this shit b ya hot on the beats and nice on the track a lil prolem with the breath control i heard u breathing in the hook b..but this is hot vocals are crisp..holla atcha boy..can u rtf


http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3112997

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thanks the feed people, 'ppreciate it alot...

and yeerrr long time, no speak, blackmage mann, hows shit goin??? hahaa

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thanks mannnnn, 'ppreciate that

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beat was hot

can I rap to one of your beats? lol


everything here was str8...nothing too extreme either way


keep em comin man



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