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12-03-06, 01:16 PM | #1 | |||||||
I'm Talented.Period.
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Hood Opera, new Q joint...
IP: 40C2 F668
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^Click on "Hood Opera: Fill it with music" Beat: Akil Sharp (intro clip from "Titanic") Hook: Tha Q aka Reflecz Verses: 1 & 2, Q Concept: expressing my current outlook Holla 1 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237892 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237890 Verse 1 Sometimes I feel like God's not real but he deals with me And on the real, I been sinkin' like my will's at sea Level, I got the devil in my psyche They used to call me lil Mikey, but now I'm likely To pull a Nike, and just do it, put my lil finger through The metal hoop and pull it, the blood will pool quick Ly, shit be droppin' on me, ploppin' on me My heart is lonely, cuz I ain't even got a homie Nah homie, and I ain't even got a home, see Rest my dome on worries, home was very Belligerent, a lil kid livin' with a nemesis Memories of torment, pain, forced the dormant Rain to fall in torrents, and I ain't even got insurance My heart was flooded, gutted, like I was Halibut Or perch, now the hurt is worse at first was terse Now it's a curselike Gypsy hit me, I'm strictly sickly Hook: 2x Every day I look around I see a million excuses To hate my life, and walk around like I was silly and useless I feel the acoustics, but really, it just kills me when news get Depressin' on the real, I just fill it with music Verse 2 I wanna cry, but my tear ducts are near fucked and dry now I wanna soar like Dino, damn, they died out I wanna iron outmy issue like I'm dry cleanin' I wanna give up now, but I will die clingin' I wanna try singin' like a bird that flies high I wanna die thinkin', I deserved to die high I wanna fly, but my wings are clipped, so I lie On the ground thinkin', I will never see the smile I Had a long time ago, before the bad was how it go Before the sad outweighed the glad, before my dad jus left my ass Now the glass is half empty even when it's full Fuckin' child abuse, nah, not tryna make excuse What the fuck is the use, I'm accustomed to color Black drops from my black heart, dead on the black top Black at my funeral, black was the shooter, yo Back when I was embryo, black I saw in utero uh |
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12-03-06, 04:35 PM | #2 | ||||
I don't lose
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IP: 7994 4630
haha Q does my sig influence your lyrics?...i like the beat and i think you coulda done better on it.....but its still deep n really good i just know ya potential....n scrap that intro, i dont like the reflecz thing over n over....my opinion tho...good shit stay up
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dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead |
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12-03-06, 07:09 PM | #3 | |||||||
I'm Talented.Period.
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IP: 40C2 F668
preciate da feed
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12-03-06, 11:18 PM | #4 | ||||
L.E
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IP: A70E 7938
Listening...
Beat is nice. Quality is a hell of a lot better than the last shit I heard from you. Flow is nice, but you could have stepped up your delivery. Sounds pretty monotonous. Lyrics are pretty cool, like the Nike line. Hook...ehh...not much of a hook in my mind, would have better been off as a bridge. You've done better hooks before. Second verse is better the first...like the funeral part. Pretty nice track man. Keep it up. |
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12-03-06, 11:46 PM | #5 | ||||||
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IP: 6BD7 BD9F
second verse is alot better than the first stood out more quality upped and adds to ya mic presence something u lost with a crap mic monotonous in spots but i guess we all are at times good overall track tho holla
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12-04-06, 01:27 PM | #6 | |||||||
I'm Talented.Period.
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IP: 47F3 E0A2
preciate te feed
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