Hey Yall Its yo Boy stanza and Now im back at my Beat Making and if you want to check out some latest work you can hit up my soundlick Page in my sig ...If you want me to hit you up with some beats I dont mind but I aint bout to be jus handing out beats everywhere lol......but yeah Some of them are hot and some are not but ill add a new beat everyday so always check back in for new beats .....abd request you could pm me ....My latest audio is on my Myspace page Also located in my sig

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sup.

You dont think- intro is a bit dragged on...um, i was waiting for a nice solid bass line to come in but it hasnt come in yet, and i get the feeling it isnt going to. Seems like its missing somthing without maybe a double kick bass line.

Good day - you to do some EQ on your bass on this one,its not smooth and sound slike it slightly distorts/peaks. its peiced together nicely. Those vocals dont work well..
again your main focus needs to be a more consistant bass line,instead of focusing more on those drum sounds..this again,would eb solid with a nice smooth bass like through it.

The knocks- like the glass smashing effect used. this sound slike a intro into the main beat... yup there it goes its kicked up tempo.. you need a deeper pitch on that main dit dit dit dit dit dit bass, sounds to techno. overall better than the other two.

Jam on it- alot going on so soon, couldnt imagine a good track entering like this one.. um, yeh its kinda weird.. that effect sounds like a cross between a dorr opening and a fart.
lol.

good shit though, stay learning.

LOl alot of peopl would have done that but thanx for the advice and I will use it to my advantage ........

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