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I'm Talented.Period.
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^Click on "The Audition" Beat: Arkreatek Hook: Concept of me responding to questions. Verses: All Q Concept: Imagine that you are in an audition room in front of your rap idols. In my case, that'd be Biggie Smalls, Jay, Chuck D, et. al. You have to give them an impromptu performance. So, this is your chance. Holla 1 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=238291 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=238207 |
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this is coo your quality sounds like u did this back in the day it sounds so old school word...i like how u did this....i think ur vox need a lil more equin or maybe multiband compressor to bring out the lower levels of ur vox...beat is coo overall this was coo all the verses and delivery was on point...gud shit man
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I don't lose
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IP: 7994 4630
ya vocals need to be upped a bizzy.....damn man in you spit your almost there, you do it in some lines n then others you just miss.....you need to feel it a lil more, or make us feel that you feel it.....nice concept tho....like how you did the talking all to one side...good use of panning....makes it stick out more.....good shit but again almost there almost.....rtf on fly away the same beat that u was on a long time ago hahah.....
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Ike
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cool concept...
the beat fits the concept well...but im just not feelin it... on the first verse...there are a couple spots where i feel like you rushed the flow a lil...i realize you were going for the slowing down, then speeding up deal in a few spots...but it kinda sounded unnatural.......2nd verse was a lot better to me as far as flow wise........lyrically its the same as what you usually bring to the table...pretty good..but not mind blowing...def. not bad though dont get me wrong on that... quality was ok...kinda sounded like you were speaking through the phone a bit on your verses..u add that EQ in a bit?.....that may have been what you were going for considering you were "on stage"....sounded more like a live performance....overall not bad...keep it up
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