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Old 12-13-06, 01:08 PM   #1
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Moment of Clairty [REAL TALK-NEW STYLE MAN WILL RTF]

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Old 12-13-06, 02:39 PM   #3
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lol cho kahn mi wang?..u chinese?


anyways listening...


beat is smooth and i'm feeling it


hook is nice...yeah feeling it!



nah@ how u came in with your verse..but yeah i'm feeling you on this..flows is nice and delivery is better than the last time i heard ya..i'm liking the lyrics too...the emotion seems right and better on verse 2..is the sample saying 'be your self' or 'be your savior?'...if its be yourself then its like that was to me...
your dubs kinna seemed to be faster than your actual verse...anyhow i'm feling the aim of this...makes me wanna reflect for a min...


idk..i'm just feling this which on a normal basis i wudnt cos its not my steez...wonder what just made me like it!...yeah decent drop...keep this style w/e up..its better!

hit my sig..thanx
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Old 12-13-06, 05:30 PM   #4
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liked the flow it was different
lyrically i htink your in the top 3 of rv for reals youre not mainstream at all
cool track cho
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Old 12-13-06, 07:05 PM   #5
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damn man....your shit like 80 percent of it would be soooo much better if you fix up your dubs....all are always like milliseconds off.....takes so much away from your deep lyrics....did you spit these verses at different times voice sounds signifantly lower the second verse...i unno....you have this rushed sence to your verses sometimes that on a beat like shit should have been calmed down, the more you relax the better you are....this was a pretty good song and you seem to be gettin better with each song you put out....good shit, we gotta get another collab in soon
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Old 12-13-06, 08:46 PM   #6
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wow.........thx for all the love already, n i take all this into consideration as i write n record...and will defo RTF

thx a lot ppl\

and yvonne..<- witch is my mothers name lol

she saying savior

and thx lots willa...

and yea 286, get @ me man
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Old 12-13-06, 09:55 PM   #7
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like the beat


who is on that hook?


I like the dark tone of the track...


flow is very focused...delivery fits


lyrics seem personal = good


nice soundin track



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Old 12-15-06, 07:52 AM   #8
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oh cool!

cos 1ce i read it it says in my head for some mins!
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