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12-13-06, 12:31 AM | #1 | ||||
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***Running*** NEW HOTNESS FROM YA BOY!!!!!
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Word.....made this for LE's league and just wanted some feed on it.....
....please don't make fun of my singing Running It's the second song on there ------------- Links: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=238291 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=238258
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12-13-06, 10:24 PM | #2 | ||||
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12-14-06, 02:03 AM | #4 | |||||
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Intro is pretty coo....alright comin in with a gang banga type beat. You sound serious with your delivery. Lyrics are fuckin tight. Your flow is fuckin hot as fuck man. The hook is pretty coo, you sound mad different on it. You sound like you mad gangsta cat lol. Damn you fa real delivered this track good, you pulled it off nicely man. nice track
rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...670#post3123670
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12-14-06, 03:02 AM | #5 | ||||
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word this tracks tight
The intro was cool...............beat is hard.......delivery is def. a strong point you have..flow was solid........Switch ups were good....... the hook was tight A CRIMAL "WWWWWWWWWWWWWHAT" lol that hook is sick i can tell u actually put effort in this Expect this to be in my next video for the RV TOP 5 Songs of the Week |
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12-14-06, 09:40 PM | #6 | ||||
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I appreciate all the feed fellas. I hit your thread up Paranoid.....PT, I hit your thread up before you hit mine, but I'll hit your next one up too....lol.
Sup with some more feed?
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12-14-06, 11:49 PM | #7 | ||||
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no feed. why? because there's nothin about this i dont like
*downloads*
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12-15-06, 07:44 PM | #8 | ||||
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Dope-a-licious
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12-16-06, 08:19 AM | #9 | |||||||
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beat is cool...
flow is focused and intense starting out...good Delivery works...nothing bad, nothing great = good lyrics...sound cool Hook: got kind of drowned in the beat...some of the lyrics went by me Well thought out track tho sounded good 7/10 1 |
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12-17-06, 06:27 PM | #10 | ||||
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Bump.............
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12-19-06, 08:21 PM | #11 | ||||
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Bumping it one more time
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