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12-17-06, 09:38 AM | #1 | |||
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15. Feeble Minded (1-0) vs. 16. Wyte (1-0)
IP: F956 A220
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12-17-06, 02:34 PM | #2 | ||||
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IP: 1543 7BA0
Last edited by Wyte : 12-21-06 at 05:24 PM. |
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12-21-06, 06:07 PM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: 3B43 EB4A
Its apparent I taste victory as this fag gets stared in the face
Don't worry, I could tell you were wyte without a name declaring your race But I'm not even caring to ace, just get the win dude & wreck this You can have all day to post, but I'm only gonna give you a second I'm your guide for the day. Battlings hard and puns are tricky... DTH made a thread that suits you.. its called "elevation" and its under stickies Ima brag all I want, so it really doesn't matter how I rate gloating when they say this was close, really, they dont want your nub ass hate voting acting dope. but a quick win is what you won't cop with that gimmick fuck 14 lines, pussy, we both know a couple of shots is your limit |
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12-21-06, 10:13 PM | #4 | ||||
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IP: 1543 7BA0
Let’s see ..you retired ..came back to RB ..N’ you were rusty as fuck
Because Feeble had a great fall ..to bad im bout to fuck his winter up Tracks, trash ...writtens, wack ..damn theres nothing good about you Because if Feeble Tuna song ..I bet that shit’ll taste like Chicken too Let’s see ..there’s Feeble Minded & Feeble Mind ..neither are trouble Because when the going gets tough ..Minded calls in his stunt double Fuck all the bullshit ..ill get to the point now .. N’ bitch I aint a hater Because if we actually buy your Act ..it’ll be Scene in the trash later You don’t bring the pain ..u bring shitty verses ..your shit don’t sell Because Feeble said he retied from text… …N’ used it as an excuse to end his losing streak in LLL |
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12-22-06, 12:13 AM | #5 | ||||
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IP: 1543 7BA0
Posting so people know it's ready for votes.
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12-22-06, 12:16 AM | #6 | ||||||
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IP: 3B43 EB4A
Before I retired, my LLL record was (9-1)
And DTH, I hope this isn't considered swaying. Its just a fact, plain and simple. |
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12-22-06, 12:25 AM | #7 | ||||
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Lol, I hade writers block towards the end of my verse and I put down the first thing that came to my mind...
..and that shouldn't be swaying. |
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12-22-06, 01:25 AM | #8 | ||||||
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IP: 3B43 EB4A
yeah man. good luck
LINKS http://community.rapverse.com/showt...083#post3127083 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3127088 its not letting me paste a link. i voted on your battle, trus. Last edited by Feeble Minded : 12-23-06 at 06:23 PM. |
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12-22-06, 01:53 AM | #9 | |||
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IP: 7699 FD3A
I'm your guide for the day. Battlings hard and puns are tricky...
DTH made a thread that suits you.. its called "elevation" and its under stickies vs Let’s see ..there’s Feeble Minded & Feeble Mind ..neither are trouble Because when the going gets tough ..Minded calls in his stunt double ehh, weird battle here, i thought it was pretty close but im gonna have to vote for feeble minded, i DO NOT believe that it is the real feeble minded because he isnt acting jewish enough...lol, oh yea, Artistik that signed up for next week IS NOT philly......anyhow......yea.. vote/feeble minded |
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12-22-06, 02:25 AM | #10 | |||||
ROFL @ u niggas since '04
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IP: D681 4A91
Its apparent I taste victory as this fag gets stared in the face
Don't worry, I could tell you were wyte without a name declaring your race I'm your guide for the day. Battlings hard and puns are tricky... DTH made a thread that suits you.. its called "elevation" and its under stickies vs Let’s see ..you retired ..came back to RB ..N’ you were rusty as fuck Because Feeble had a great fall ..to bad im bout to fuck his winter up Ok. this battle wasn't tight but it was cool. This really can't be feeble or maybe he just saving shit for later. either ways, Wytes verse ok. had some bad wording problems that made his punches look choppy and with out impact. Personals were there and concepts and word play were ok but you didn't have more then the lines that I quoted to get this battle. Feeble came decent as well here. Not much to talk about but his lines kind of had me laughing about. I liked his flow and structure along with how simple he makes it look. He had 2 quotables to Wytes 1 so he gets this, but not by much. V/ Feeble Minded |
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12-22-06, 04:40 AM | #11 | ||||
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IP: 2029 97B3
But I'm not even caring to ace, just get the win dude & wreck this
You can have all day to post, but I'm only gonna give you a second I'm your guide for the day. Battlings hard and puns are tricky... DTH made a thread that suits you.. its called "elevation" and its under stickies acting dope. but a quick win is what you won't cop with that gimmick fuck 14 lines, pussy, we both know a couple of shots is your limit vs. Let’s see ..you retired ..came back to RB ..N’ you were rusty as fuck Because Feeble had a great fall ..to bad im bout to fuck his winter up This wasn't a bad battle, i was interested to see how Feebs was droppin lately. I think he's so subtle with some of his wordings that alot of people aren't seein the lines as that nice. All three of the lines i quoted were good lines, neitehr was dope, but they were good lines. The elevation thread line was nice, also a subtle swagger and sarcasm to it. Closer was cool, i like how you connected the drug references with little to point out that's what you were talking about. Wyte, you obviously didn't drop a bad verse, but you do have some room to improve i think, or like you said, you just didn't have alot of ideas for this week which happens to us all. Regardless, the winter/fall line was a solid start then you began to tail off from there. Not a bad battle. vote- feeble
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12-22-06, 09:51 AM | #12 | |||
Beginning Your Ending
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I'm your guide for the day. Battlings hard and puns are tricky...
DTH made a thread that suits you.. its called "elevation" and its under stickies vs Fuck all the bullshit ..ill get to the point now .. N’ bitch I aint a hater Because if we actually buy your Act ..it’ll be Scene in the trash later That wasn't the real Feeble Minded, so I don't know why people are riding his verse just because they think it is. Be honest fellas, 'Feeble' came with a poor verse, and I don't even care if it was the real guy because it wasn't good. I know who the real Feeble is and it's sure as fuck not the guy who dropped in this thread. The only bar reminiscent of Feeble was the stickies thread line which was pretty dope. Wyte didn't drop great but he came witter and at least tried to be fresh with his concepts, whereas the Feeble imposter just dropped bland. Wyte's opener could have been dope but wording let it down pretty badly, but I liked the scene punch even if it has been done before, it was a good flip. V/ Wyte Last edited by Appocolyptik : 12-22-06 at 04:41 PM. |
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12-22-06, 10:49 AM | #13 | |||
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Ima brag all I want, so it really doesn't matter how I rate gloating
when they say this was close, really, they dont want your nub ass hate voting vs Let’s see ..you retired ..came back to RB ..N’ you were rusty as fuck Because Feeble had a great fall ..to bad im bout to fuck his winter up feeble got it. his verse was weak tho. his quotable was funny n fresh. cept that he had nothin. wyte's quotable was jus a quotable. he had nothin cept that either. feeble jus got it. wyte had a lotta played wordplay v/ feeble |
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12-22-06, 11:11 AM | #14 | |||||
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Ima brag all I want, so it really doesn't matter how I rate gloating
when they say this was close, really, they dont want your nub ass hate voting vs. Let’s see ..there’s Feeble Minded & Feeble Mind ..neither are trouble Because when the going gets tough ..Minded calls in his stunt double Feeble came stronger and was more wittier V/ Feebz
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12-22-06, 01:24 PM | #15 | |||
Skadoosh!
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But I'm not even caring to ace, just get the win dude & wreck this
You can have all day to post, but I'm only gonna give you a second I'm your guide for the day. Battlings hard and puns are tricky... DTH made a thread that suits you.. its called "elevation" and its under stickies acting dope. but a quick win is what you won't cop with that gimmick fuck 14 lines, pussy, we both know a couple of shots is your limit VS. Let’s see ..you retired ..came back to RB ..N’ you were rusty as fuck Because Feeble had a great fall ..to bad im bout to fuck his winter up I actually saw this battle as pretty one-sided. I was liking a lot of Feeble's bars and really I thought Wyte could've come a lot harder. He only had that winter/fall line that I thought was pretty solid. Lmao though at the elevation line from Feeble, that was so simple and yet it was really funny I thought. V/ - Feeble Minded |
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