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^Click on "Play the boss" Beat: Nossur, a rip on Yessur beats Hook: Pre packaged Verses: 1, 2, 3 all Q Concept: Warnin to cats who wanna act tough around me Holla 1 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=238867 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=238853 |
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The Alien Toung
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IP: F13F 4833
ur clippin..lol....beats ill man...swaggers crazy here....like the multis in the begining...hooks sick man.......she sound like some shaft shit......got angry on the 2nd verse eh?? ohh u playin ? iight lol..........idk about how many times u said pussy lol...scuff mark line was tight.....lol @ the 3rd verse line.....good shit man
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IP: 6BD7 BD9F
already listened to this beat is doin it interesting opener seems like some subliminal shit intertwined in this but th flow is a q flow and we all know a q flow is a cool flow but over all i liked this some heres and theres but i enjoy listening to the flow take course in most ur songs
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The Most Feared Gang!
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IP: 5AB8 1212
Yup I heard this beat...
Let's see how you rock this one here.... Multis is all over on here..lyrically it's decent..flow is nice..sometimes it's draggin off..and then the listener feels lost...but youre delivery and presence on this is real nice.. jeffrey dahmer rofl...eating niggas up?..ha u used that line before ![]()
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O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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IP: 93D1 7B98
Not really feeling that sample in the beat too much. It's a little too repetetive....lol. I like how you spoke over it in the second hook.....it broke up the repetetiveness of it. Anyway, I like the rhyme scheme you tried to put together in the first verse, but it took away from the flow some. Usually your flow is what stands out and it did in this song too, but for the wrong reasons. Second and third verses came back with much better flow......and LMAO @ being bored with third verses.....ROFL!!!!!!!!
I don't think many people will laugh at that, but at least I know I'm getting into that hard to crack noggin of yours ![]()
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