www.soundclick.com/paranoidcan

first once I do a full track I'm happy with. anyway leave ya links and shit I'll rtf

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3138348
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3138346

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qualitys nice.. crackle in the beat, but theres nothing you can do about that.. your flow is alot better than what ive heard from you before.
That robotic tone you usually have isnt as apparent.. hooks got a good transition to it. Like the lyrics in the mic..

Second verse you got that monotone robotic style again in the first verse.
good small switch up in your flow.. emotions aot better than what i previously heard from you. Dubs are perfect for the track.

Your rigth this is proberly the best from you, good to see you elevating brother. Stay hip hop.

first verse, not bad pretty original, like the hook, agree with ysdat bout the second verse, robotic style, nice flow pretty good, like the lyrics, like listening to true shit, try to up your emotions a lil more, mic is pretty good, overall this is your best track, I like the hook once again

RTF http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=239598