ok....def feelin the beat......

ah uk cat......feelin the period line lol
nice flow.......group sex line tight

chorus is coo......

aight flow on the 2nd verse is about the same, this is a pretty fast beat but ur hittin it pretty good

jayz lips line i hear, played but ok
lol ok...time bar hearin...

ok overall...sound quality was good to me.....o look u even wrote the lyrics, aight.....
ok after readin those too yea i can understand alot of it a lil more better now....but yea flow, i dont see any bad flaws, lyrics and delivery were better than alot thats ive heard since ive been to the site, but u do sound the same throughtout, like this was a pretty consistent soundin track, not that its bad that u dont but i dont know
truly one of those hip hop tracks......u had some good shinin moments, emotion was there.....
good track man, feelin it

peep either my "Eye of A Warrior"....."Chill Mode" or ...."Sudden Impact" if u wanna see what i am on