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Old 03-05-07, 10:43 PM   #1
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Message In A Bottle

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" Theres only one way i can say, my love has gone away... £> "

Morning light brought pink skies and there floated a dastardly plot
The last of naval forces stood path.. in my salt waters, these bastards rot
In my likely last moments, i know im proud of my empires deathly disaster
They're heavily armed wit roundz and firing definately faster
We stashed tha loot an came home lightly plastered
If we'd ran i'd have my gushing blood with generalz to write mastered
We're nothing less of demons in a dream beyond meanin
I cant hide from the minds that stop our schemin'
What u think ships that dont carry ratz know, i'll have em bleedin
Runnin pirate empirez... our ranks dont fall to a latter leavin
I vengefully recall breathin, when i'm stressed and fall
We all got the ups and downs so whoz tha fuckin best that ball
Ambush announced in tha worst of forsaken sailors crazed
Pullin tha trigger at the sky overhead on tha first of our failures days
With a loving glance on our hate for a deadly enemy with demon eyes
Upon diamonds there still lies bones of tha godly 1st kings great demise
In days of death blessed in times of slavery, my power built pyramids
Much like armies that fought endlessly devoured killin sinner kids
I chill back right now livin to light joints, do we get high later
Led by a star lined in points of a skies nature
So many years i wasted, my one true heart gone with neglect
A Flag of bone, my long dead soldiers, I remark upon with respect
When i walk out there with my guns its on, then i get laid and ride
Final entrys of gone predicaments in red rum leaves me unable to describe
Horizons hidden in the dark searched eternally, forever yours
Streaming tears of her unknowing eyes line my empty shores
Runnin for victory on my lifes work my death lives on and you know whoz crazed
My islands free to take tha honey, now my fuckin dogs lay in shallow graves
A mauled corpse rests in peace with my dedicated flags flying on streets
Well never mind, im out this mutha fucka to retire deceased
With my women and pearls that are yet to be embedded in silver hordes
Buried lost on the islands of my glimmering corpse
That long before my dying hands had ever inked this letter scribed
Survivors in my soldiers warring clickz have fell and died


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Old 03-08-07, 12:53 AM   #2
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I LIKE THE VERSE BUT THE RED WORD HAD MESS UP FOR REAL. http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3148736
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Old 03-08-07, 04:16 AM   #3
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Tha Dude Had To Write It In His Blood...... He'd Been At Sea For A Year... J/k... Thx For Tha Comment Tho
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Old 03-08-07, 12:19 PM   #4
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i actually thought the title was wack, but you put it together nig.
good job. Nice wording and shit.
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