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03-05-07, 10:43 PM | #1 | ||||||
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Message In A Bottle
IP: C96C 8391
" Theres only one way i can say, my love has gone away... £> " Morning light brought pink skies and there floated a dastardly plot The last of naval forces stood path.. in my salt waters, these bastards rot In my likely last moments, i know im proud of my empires deathly disaster They're heavily armed wit roundz and firing definately faster We stashed tha loot an came home lightly plastered If we'd ran i'd have my gushing blood with generalz to write mastered We're nothing less of demons in a dream beyond meanin I cant hide from the minds that stop our schemin' What u think ships that dont carry ratz know, i'll have em bleedin Runnin pirate empirez... our ranks dont fall to a latter leavin I vengefully recall breathin, when i'm stressed and fall We all got the ups and downs so whoz tha fuckin best that ball Ambush announced in tha worst of forsaken sailors crazed Pullin tha trigger at the sky overhead on tha first of our failures days With a loving glance on our hate for a deadly enemy with demon eyes Upon diamonds there still lies bones of tha godly 1st kings great demise In days of death blessed in times of slavery, my power built pyramids Much like armies that fought endlessly devoured killin sinner kids I chill back right now livin to light joints, do we get high later Led by a star lined in points of a skies nature So many years i wasted, my one true heart gone with neglect A Flag of bone, my long dead soldiers, I remark upon with respect When i walk out there with my guns its on, then i get laid and ride Final entrys of gone predicaments in red rum leaves me unable to describe Horizons hidden in the dark searched eternally, forever yours Streaming tears of her unknowing eyes line my empty shores Runnin for victory on my lifes work my death lives on and you know whoz crazed My islands free to take tha honey, now my fuckin dogs lay in shallow graves A mauled corpse rests in peace with my dedicated flags flying on streets Well never mind, im out this mutha fucka to retire deceased With my women and pearls that are yet to be embedded in silver hordes Buried lost on the islands of my glimmering corpse That long before my dying hands had ever inked this letter scribed Survivors in my soldiers warring clickz have fell and died http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3148724 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3148736 |
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03-08-07, 12:53 AM | #2 | |||||||
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IP: 6511 1181
I LIKE THE VERSE BUT THE RED WORD HAD MESS UP FOR REAL. http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3148736
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03-08-07, 04:16 AM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: C96C 8391
Tha Dude Had To Write It In His Blood...... He'd Been At Sea For A Year... J/k... Thx For Tha Comment Tho
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03-08-07, 12:19 PM | #4 | |||||||
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IP: 2303 05E1
i actually thought the title was wack, but you put it together nig.
good job. Nice wording and shit. |
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