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Old 04-04-07, 06:54 PM   #1
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SINGLE FROM THE MIXTAPE ft Christen Michael!!! - I don't wanna - NEW PRAHJECT

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Yeah, those who don't know who Christen Michael is, he's working with Lil' Mo right now and he's done backup vocals and dancing, and been in alot of videos.

I don't wanna feat. Christen Michael

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top joint on there..on the love tip..but a single fo sho..

This the second single from the mixtape, thought I'd leave this with y'all..let me know what u think and ill rtf.

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Old 04-04-07, 07:17 PM   #2
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i heard this on myspace
shit was decent
you know i dont usually fuck with chick tracks tho
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Old 04-04-07, 08:22 PM   #3
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you start off with a nice idea for a flow on this track...you just dont nail it at the beg, as you warm up you fall into it more naturally....i think it just has to do how comfortable you were with the stop n go flow....same with the beg of the second verse....i unno, with how i know you are, you should sound a lil more smooth....i like the singer, but what he is sayin is kinda like blah blah cliche, this track just feels like that old sayin, close but no ciguar....i feel you almost nailed it down, and with a lil more work you could but you dont have it there yet.....i feel you coulda came more personal and more into it....i feel you can do more with this man
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Old 04-04-07, 11:59 PM   #4
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you start off with a nice idea for a flow on this track...you just dont nail it at the beg, as you warm up you fall into it more naturally....i think it just has to do how comfortable you were with the stop n go flow....same with the beg of the second verse....i unno, with how i know you are, you should sound a lil more smooth....i like the singer, but what he is sayin is kinda like blah blah cliche, this track just feels like that old sayin, close but no ciguar....i feel you almost nailed it down, and with a lil more work you could but you dont have it there yet.....i feel you coulda came more personal and more into it....i feel you can do more with this man

wow you a little harsh, i thought he did his thang on this one. Personally one of my favorites. but hey i like them chick tracks so....anyway this was hot prah you know.
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Old 04-05-07, 11:17 AM   #5
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the melody of the chorus sounds really off..no doubt dude can sing but the melody is just way off..it sounds really sharp at the end. change the melody.

and yes the lyrics are really cliche. change it up. give us something more than the everyday love track.

as for the verses...theyre cool. rapping is cool for this song. just dont like the singing too much.
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Old 04-05-07, 10:24 PM   #6
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wow you a little harsh, i thought he did his thang on this one. Personally one of my favorites. but hey i like them chick tracks so....anyway this was hot prah you know.



not harsh at all... im not gon be like awesome song man cuz thas not whats gon help him improve.....he gets a more harsh criticism of his shit cuz hes at a higher level then other cats on here....so i gotta point out all the small shit, so he keeps improving on that shit.....if you want me to put a comparson rating to rv its aorund a 7.5/10.....on a comparason rating where he should be at its a 5.5/10.....i expect more from him cuz he knows and i know he can do better


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Old 04-05-07, 11:01 PM   #7
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yeah sounds half assed.i dunno just aint feelin it wsoever
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