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04-14-07, 02:27 PM
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I'm Talented.Period.
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New banga!!!!!! "What you been waitin' for"...holla atcha boyyeee!!!!!!!!!
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close this please.
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04-14-07, 02:33 PM
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wha the fuck is with you killin KA beats son?? on the screw you should lower one of the layers to a deeper....adds life to it.....pretty good first verse...you sound into it...needs a lil more directoin but the lyrics themself are hot....the carson jet, the only problem i have with it, is it didnt end hard...it just kinda ended n went into the hook, needed that final blow **FINISH HIM**(aint played that game forever) the third verse was nice too...just feel like this could be better if you had killer lines leading into the hook.....otherwise good shit...haha at the lil girls voice.....at least it sounded like that...yep...good shit, but i think you could still make it a lil better
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04-14-07, 03:18 PM
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Alot of lines get lost with all the adlibs you put in and shit, tbh
and im not really feeling that hook But besides those two things, this is cool like the rest of your music.. But you should get back to the Concept tracks man.. But word.. The hook thing, just dont bother, I hear it everyday on every track that comes from Miami.. Shit even the rest of the south, but every rapper in Miami has this played out, besides pitbull
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