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Old 04-09-07, 08:29 PM   #1
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Im So Blue Kage and Chris Stylez.

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This is a track that me and my boy did. We havent mastered it yet but we getting there.

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Kage first verse.

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Old 04-11-07, 05:04 PM   #2
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ight i like the sample beat is coo.....the first dude sounds a lil uncomfertable on the mic....the verse and flow was ight vocals coulda been upped.....next dude his flow is coo but on the monotone side.......overrall this was cool......kage imma be gettin that track done....i jus been doin a lot of things in shit ight....but yea i got u...pz
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Old 04-11-07, 10:08 PM   #3
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lol this is not kage....just Chris Stylez....but i'll tell him that/
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Old 04-14-07, 02:27 PM   #4
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waaaay too much "boom" in your mic...turn down the vocals and the bass


lovin the beat and the sample...a bit loop-ish...but cool

Why the drop out (pan right) 1/3 through? kinda threw me

are u flowin or talkin

actually...the drop outs are decent...


ur more talkin than flowin...if ur gonna do that, betta make sure ur delivery is spotless...it really wasn't


2nd flow was tough to hear...

hmm...interesting sounding track and creative....but flawed




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Old 04-14-07, 05:48 PM   #5
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you do know there is already a rapper named "Cage" right? anyway I'm def feelin the hook, for the first verse the vocals seem to loud dude and the quality sounds weak. , not that it sounds weak but it sounds like theres no reverb or nothin on it, just sounds plain. the flow is basic, but the lyrics are decent could just some more wittyness in there. the 2nd verse now the vocals are too low, the quality sounds coo though. lyrics was coo and the flow was a lot more fluent than the first verse. overall I'd say this a pretty coo track I was def feelin the concept as well.

rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...077#post3159077
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