alright. little joint here. Checc it ou


www.myspace.com/kontroverzycan

beat provied by: Purple ent
Lyrics: kontroverzy
mixing: kontroverzy


links:

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=240154
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3163107

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your voice sounds too loud in the intro...

beat is cool..that noise kinda gets annoying though..

you say "nigga" too much..hahaha



verse 1 - quality sounds really weird..like the flow you got on this one..real laid back...lyrically its decent. nothing special..sounds like you stretch a lot of lines just so that it matches that snare.

hook - quality is horrible on this..i like this hook though..no doubt really feelin this



and it ended...kinda wished it kept going. but it was a cool track. good stuff

yeah. the qualities booty. Too poor to buy new equipment at the moment. and i do say nigga too much. sa'll gravy doe

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hahaha no doubt..it was cool though

sorta like cancer...my sick don't stop

^^Lines like that are mundane because you could literally replace cancer with any incurable disease...So, then, what makes the line special?

other wise...nice flow and cockiness on track


beat was slick


pretty coo joint man

stay up


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yea quality needs to be upped, and idk never was a fan of people sayin they the best, im not a fan of egos when they dont have the stats to back it up....just sayin...~1~ other than that i was feeling the beat.

word, nah I stated im the nicest in my city. And i showed why. never said i was the best. and i feel you on that tip. i hate when people say they're the best rapper alive. I never went that far. but respect the feedbacc

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