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Beat: Timeless Beats
Hook: Tha Q
Verses: 1-3 Tha Q (verse 3 is only 8 bars to allow room for one more run of the hook)

Concept: I wanted this track to represent a lyrical venting session...ill concerns...I'm spitting what's on my mind, but still maintaining ill schemes.

Hook: Sing-rap combo (1x)

There are times I get lost, but God finds me
There are times I get...confused, when nobody
Is there to show me love...there, to hold me up
Will you, be the one to believe I can be, anything, I can see

While singing the layers of the hook, I get pitchy (out of tune) occasionally...But, I feel the overall sound/feel of the joint is hot.

Also, if you hadn't noticed, the beginning of verse three is completely off-kilter...I'm being facetious there...I'm basically saying rappers who spit lines like that are single-handedly killing rap.

Holla


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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=242055
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=242161

this is really weird..beat is real nice.

hook dont like the singing...the lyrics are cool..but as for the tone and melody i dont like it

your lyrics are kinda weird cuz its like 2 different moods colliding..flow is on point as always..thats always a plus. honestly i think its kinda weird.

second verse lyrics again are strange..just because the beat and the sound of the hook call for a mellow sounding track and the lyrics somewhat contradict it.



overall nothing i would listen to..honestly i know u like the hook but it just doesnt work out.

eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeer up







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this beat is raw... not fellin the singing too.. verse1 is tyte...this jawn is raw.. fellin this... underground shit.. nice.

yea the singing is ehhh lol.....ur voice is different in this one.....ur flow is ehhh i dont like how most the dubbs is not alligned right wit ur main vocals it gives it like a rushed feel...on the second vvverse i think ur dubbs is too loud and ur main vocals is too low....im listening this song thru my Yamaha HS 50 m.......ur ad libs is ight....overall this was ight u stay up =1=

Q stop rushin ya shit, ya dubs are always way off man
besides that, straight track. im actually feelin the hook quite a bit

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