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Old 05-01-07, 02:53 AM   #1
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Kontroverzy - Im Fly (studio Quality)

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aiight, this is a self glorifying tracc right here. Nothing but punches and sicc flows. let me know what you think and i'll return the favour


Beat produced by:
2 toxic
Lyrics provided by: Kontroverzy
mix and mastering by: Burke
Vocals by: Kontroverzy

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Lyrics
I'm Fly as a kite ..to fly for ur Sight..
Im flyer then Et On His Bike..
Whip Game Tight, Nice With The Mic..
So Gangsta, I'll play dice for ur Life..
Siccer Then Sars, Rippin dem bars..
Sticcin Them broads like a pornostar..
Yeah, I dont Stop Like a Greenlight..
I Rip Tracx then im out like 3 strikes..
and u know the Heat Right, in reach For protection..
Im Fly and I Stay Up Like an erection..
Flow Contagous, each fuccin breath is..
rap to ur gurl and i bet id give her a coochie infection..
No need to be guessin..
It's No Question... who the best is..
yeah, I call The Shots Like Reffin..
matta fact Kontros Flyer then heaven..



I Spit Flames, i call that the kitchen flow..
I'm CRACC like whats on the kitchen stove..
I supply the baker The Way im gettin doe..
Im So fly...Watch how i switch the flow



My bank accounts Filled..
Im countin my Bills
My wrist is On Chill.
I'm Hust-lin Still..
My teeth is all grilled..
I'm ballin until..
I reach to a mill.

Fucc It..



Im Fly Like a Zipper, Fly like the big dipper
slicc Hitter,Lip Splitter,
quicc ripper, like a virgin wen the dicc in her..
U lose, i'm like december..I Been Winner..
But I spring like march..Burn like summer, when the baseline starts..
Raps-Simp, Son but im far From bart..
I'm More Like Bonds Cuz i knocc em out the park...
I spit Fire, Make the damn sun retire..
The gun aims higher at them fuccin dicc riderz..
Light em Like a lighter, Pop Em Like A Tire..
Shoot em like a sniper, Yo tell 'em who's flier..




Flow so incredible..Hot Like Pots..
My bitch give me head, N i drop dem thoughts
I roll wit dem Niggaz That Pop Dem Tops..
We don't even move wen a glocc is shot
& we hot box, in hot spots, We chop Roccs..
& stash him in bentleys at the chop Shop..
Gucci Belt, 2 Inches from the hammer..
ice make u Freeze like a digital Camera..
Kids In my Hood Say Kon U a Bastard..
Cuz i blaze the whole blocc so they never see santa...
I'm the shit like a first graders Pampers..
Mess Wit Da Clique and my heat will tan ya..
Hold Up, Let Me Chyll For a minute..
I'm fly as a plane with a pilot In it..
My bars connect hit em like pile driver..
Ya'll just fall off like a damn sky diver









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& the kidd york song
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Old 05-01-07, 03:40 AM   #2
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I think that your verses got better as it went on your first verse I wasn't really feeling and the flow was off in spots.but overall quality is pretty decent. Iono this should be re-recorded. I think you should go through it again and re-do or cut out the first verse...and you should try to fix the hook up a lil. and then the other verses were pretty good.....flow was better on the other verses...so just change up the hook and the first verse and this would be a nice little banger..

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Old 05-01-07, 08:46 AM   #3
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yeah i feel that. this was so unorganized when i got to the niggaz house. And i have no idea what to do with the hook
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Old 05-01-07, 12:50 PM   #4
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Lol at studio quality this is no where near studio quality...this is jus decent....ight ur flow is coo delivery seems ight lyrics was coo......next dude kinda stumbbled his rhymes if thats the hook i dunno ehh.....kontro back on.....this sounds like text rappin.....overall this is decent keep doin ur thing homie...stay up =1=
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Old 05-01-07, 12:52 PM   #5
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dug the wordplay, lil redundent flow... decent track i guess
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Old 05-01-07, 12:56 PM   #6
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nigga, if you heard my shit before. then you'd know what i meant by Studio Quality
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Old 05-03-07, 07:51 PM   #7
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Oh shit, whats good Kontro??

Beat is hot, but you come in a little monotonish..Feels like you could have used a little more energy in spots..Lyrics on some Club shit..Flow is pretty on point, slips a little in a few spots, but nothing too bad..Hook is decent, I liked the kitchen stove line..Feelin' verse 2 more than the first one, flow's hot..Overall, solid track you got here bro. Hit me up, we should get some shit goin'
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Old 05-03-07, 10:04 PM   #8
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yeah son im alwayz down. I got the updated version on my myspace with prah ject on the hook
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Old 05-03-07, 10:38 PM   #9
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this joint is HOT. but you want it to ACTUALLY sound like studio quality?


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Old 05-03-07, 11:09 PM   #10
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lmfao yeah i know what you mean. my bad for saying studio quality. Just alot better then my Usual quality


and yeah holla at me for details about making it sound like "Studio Quality"
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