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Old 05-28-07, 08:12 PM   #1
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JAY 3RD & KIDD YORK - SOMETHIN TO RELY ON (SEAN DIVINE PRODUCTIONS)

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yea we bringin back the old school feel wit the new school sound.. given these kids somethin to rely on and vibe to at the same time..

Intro/outro - Jay 3rd
Verse 1 - Kidd York
Hook - Sean Divine Mix
Verse 2 - Jay 3rd

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=5392752

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Old 05-28-07, 08:27 PM   #2
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What's hot:

Beat
Both flows


What needs work:

Verse lyrics could be more creative...needs more quotables


Overall:

Good track...and I DID remember the hook


nice one fellas


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Old 05-29-07, 03:10 AM   #3
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ayo definitely feelin this beat..like it a lot


kidd york you come in real laid back and nice..your voice matches this as does your emotion. i agree with q..your lyrics need to upgrade for these kinda songs..

hook is simple..its cool

jay 3rd you come in with a little bit more energy..lyrically nothing decent..at times your flow seemed a little weird. like you cut a few lines a split second short.
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Old 05-29-07, 11:29 PM   #4
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Originally Posted by Tha .Q
What's hot:

Beat
Both flows


What needs work:

Verse lyrics could be more creative...needs more quotables


Overall:

Good track...and I DID remember the hook


nice one fellas


bangin



i know you do, cuz it was from my track way back....word up, flowed w. it well, personally think my version was a bit better...
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


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Old 05-30-07, 12:21 AM   #5
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if u could pm me urs just curous what it sounds like
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Old 05-30-07, 12:27 AM   #6
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Fuck Kid York!









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Old 05-30-07, 01:03 AM   #7
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What's hot:

Beat
Both flows


What needs work:

Verse lyrics could be more creative...needs more quotables


Overall:

Good track...and I DID remember the hook


nice one fellas


bangin - "the Q" said this...lol and hes sayin fuck "kid york"....get it right...u left out the D unlike ur sex life.....
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Old 05-30-07, 05:41 AM   #8
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I was talkin bout Jay 3rds part



...but, I see you just burnt 1/2 ya brain cells coming up with that played diss.

Save them...you might need them...Wait, drop outs don't need brain cells.





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Old 05-30-07, 12:03 PM   #9
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lol god damn it... i aint gon let this one happen.. so chill out..
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Old 05-30-07, 04:13 PM   #10
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Yo jay talk some sense into ur boy lol sayin fuck kidd for what reason lol
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Old 05-30-07, 05:26 PM   #11
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i honestly thought he was just joken
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Old 05-30-07, 08:11 PM   #12
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lol at you leavin feed on it then askin to hear it....here's the link

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=241509
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


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Old 05-30-07, 09:47 PM   #13
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lol yea i just realized i heard this before lol i listen to so many tracks i dont remember what shit i be hearin at times lol
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