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06-25-07, 02:02 AM
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I don't lose
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Im Addicted To This Song!
IP: F74A 5C03
i didnt post this in the songs forum cuz its not quite a rap song, and im only in a little part of it, but if you branch out n listen to more of rap you gotta give this one a try, tell me what you think of my part too....its a local bmore band i know, was fooling around with them one day n they threw this track on their bonus cd that came with their first 500 album copies......listen to it, its J Roddy Walston and the Busniess - Go Malachi (rmx)
Go Malachi (rmx) ft 286 - http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=5488292 yep so what you think?
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06-25-07, 02:40 AM
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-BTR-
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IP: 2B02 4E7F
Hmm..voice sounds very interesting. Like a mix between John Legend and Jason Mraz. Something like that. Piano sounds pretty simple..nothing wrong with that. Sounds like he strains a few times which at times can be good..times like this. Mixing on the drums pretty much sucks. The symbols are way too harsh. Lyrics are pretty odd...now that I understand the song, it's not so bad. The melody of his singing on the verses gets boring after a while. On the last chorus they should have kept the energy up instead of going up and then down and then up. I like the transition into the last part..bridge? There's too much of a rollercoaster in this song. Your part kinda comes out of nowhere so it's a bit strange. I honestly don't think that it fit very well in the song. Your verse alone was pretty cool. Very short so it's hard for me to say that I really liked it or not. Flow was simple..it worked with the music. If this was an instrumental that would be cool. So talk to them and tell them to record an instrumental so I can hop on it too. Not bad. Kinda like this song..it grows on you after a while. Good job.
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06-25-07, 02:54 PM
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Ike
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IP: 5006 8890
ill...
id like to take a stab at a verse on this song.....good stuff
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06-25-07, 03:00 PM
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IP: 46BB D888
yea def a stand out song here ya voice seems slighly more bassy in the production verse was fitting definately enjoyed this .....
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06-25-07, 08:07 PM
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10:23 till i'm 86
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IP: 2E16 55B9
dope times a million
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06-26-07, 05:10 AM
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I don't lose
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IP: F74A 5C03
thanks...yea i love this song so much
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead |
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06-27-07, 09:20 AM
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I don't lose
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IP: F74A 5C03
uppin so more people can get addicted to it like ike did...haha
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead |
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06-27-07, 04:49 PM
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Killin' G'z
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IP: 0891 3459
lmfao at you gettin' addicted to your own fuckin' song,... I might listen to it later
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06-27-07, 04:55 PM
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Killin' G'z
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IP: 0891 3459
ok dope line I just heard, and it only feels like mairage when we have sex, and she only does it for the checks or somethin' like that.. dope dope, true ish right there. Waits for somethin' else to stand out......(takes another toke, still waitin') ok just heard another one... (only cuz I know where he is comin' from right now sooooo fuckin' bad) ok now you come in (you ruined the quality all of a sudden, or made it better?.. but it changes which I dont like) you didnt really say nothin' niice, maybe cuz it was to short. Cant even understand what the fuck is bein' said right now.. but its cool I guess. ok, so now its over?.. I guess you should have just stayed out of his track, but some of his shit was ok, but nothin' to get addicted too, it wasnt even close to crack. but ne who I'd rate this 5/10 and thats bein' fair.
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TAKE MY ADVICE FROM PEOPLE FROM CANADA nd FUCK YA LYFE
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