Diss To CHARASMATIC #3

You say you’re Italian you just a stallion of stupidity wear a medallion
With no true ability, you talk loud and can’t walk proud, I’m like a battalion
Of troops got groups of tactics while you can only act it flunky
Bitch you abuse rap when you use crap words rhymes whack and junky
Seeing crazy by being lazy you have no skills and can never flow ill
This fool can’t escape rhyme school await you graduate then go build
A foundation of lyrics, try carry a library of books all your stuff run-of-the-mill
Your gun won’t kill it fill with blanks son, like Jack and Jill you fell down a hill
And spilled knowledge and game from your garbage brain now lame
Without sense no doubt dense with facts and your girl somehow blame
Your dick for being sick and not having sex damn man you grabbing the kotex
Sissy ass boy, in rap you march corrupt and it’s a harsh insult to be loco and vexed
You don’t have a system of teaching therefore your wisdom not reaching folks
Write squeeching quotes not preaching hopes got a pan of rusty rhymes and hoaxs
Dusty lines and jokes need to lube your style attitude is wild you just a rude child
Look I kick it with bling like a wicked king get your girl stick it and cum cling foul
To your sheets your bitch smiled while I skeet you can’t reconcile in the streets
Spare your reputation and prepare for separation from rap perhaps and this completes
Your carreer in here, my rhymes hydraulics are solid like a stonewall best make
A phone call for help before you step

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^^^^^^^^^ lol yeah why not post it in the open mic section along with your other posts....just throwing it out there cough.....

i like your wordplay and multis some vocab too....structure was a little off.... and your punches didn't come strong.....for an off the top this is good but for a diss punches were lacking....keep writing though ~1~....

Thanks For Real Doe