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Old 04-11-08, 08:59 PM   #1
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Black Magik...here's my track to your beat

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dont wanna be.mp3 - 2.96MB

Verse 1 & 2: Q
Hook: sample, Q ad libs "Hip Hop Babaaay"

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Old 04-11-08, 09:38 PM   #2
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dont like your vocals


no hate... dunno if you can really change them or not... i jus recon you sound kind of whiney sometimes with a pinch of pussy in ya voice...

know what i mean dude?

i recon you needa harden up ya steezo when your rapping..

just my opinion.....
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Old 04-11-08, 11:54 PM   #3
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you're lyrics were okay.. but it feels like you try way to hard... you tried to make it lyrically good so much your delivery got boring... no one wants to listen to anyone with boring as delivery.. No hate but I honestly could not wait for the song to end so i stopped it.
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Old 04-12-08, 01:03 AM   #4
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yea all his songs are liek that, Iunno wassup with Q, it's like he's good, bt there's this one thign that makes me not enjoy listening to his music and not find it good.. and I dont know what it is, maybe what dabatos said, or what nos said, or a mix of both, who knows
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Old 04-12-08, 01:13 AM   #5
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Props on the beat BM. Solid as fuck.
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Old 04-12-08, 01:20 AM   #6
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All of black magiks beats are dope lol
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Old 04-12-08, 01:25 PM   #7
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Thank you, sir
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Old 04-12-08, 02:49 PM   #8
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I ripped ur "butterflies" beat before you re-did it and made it impossible to spit my old track on it loll get at me on aim ill show u
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