rough mix of a beat im workin on... Feel free to rip this if you want, and/or give feed so I can up my sheeeeit. holler.

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*edit (new mix on the beat)

http://www.zshare.net/audio/54400366e439575e/

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This is good, but to me it's nothing eye popping that makes me go "OH SHIT"

I like it....sept the sampled voice of the man going "aww yeah" through the verse. The back up singers sounds cool though.

Drums are solid, diggin the drums.

So far this beat isn't bad

It hasn't had anything stick out like crazy, but still a nice beat.

This is like a wake up early and throw on some shit and look fly beat.

Describing that perfect saturday morning.


Where is the hook though? Only question....

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The Music

new mix killed it. plus some of my cymbals werent as nice. this one goes hard.

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added a make shift hook so you'd know where it comes in. word.

http://www.zshare.net/audio/54410352d116ebf8/

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okay I like the new version you posted a looot.

I would spit something to that.

This was sick.

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The Music

GET IN AND GET RIGHT......


Im digging ya beat skills.... got that classic production... you know a good sample when you hear it kid... i gotta give you that....

i like the wayne hook...

but... if you could hush the male singer throughout verse... and have him only come in on every 4th bar or 6th... so when you go to record ya verse or write it ... you dont gotta mold it around homeboi in the backround... ya dig??

otherwise... solid joint... i would rock this

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Full Metal Bronsky Dropin 1st Quarter 08'

sounds like u sampled from dmx,wasnt really feeling this beat,no hate just honest feedback

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"the loudest one in the room is the weakest"- frank lucas..

no can do, its as hard as taking lyrics off a beat if u want the instrumental... I jus say work around it lol. and how did I jack this from dmx? (talksik)

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this is the roc boy beat by kanye west with bunch of bullshit thrown on it

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imma do this in a bit.
just as a preview. lol promo for ya beat.

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iGhostwrite Mixtape DL

lol ur a clown. STILL. This flip kills any I've heard of the same sample, Bun B, Scarface, Drake.... bunch a guys. Why would I be leaking a beat I jus flipped for free online if I was worried about my sample? lol. haaaaaaate.

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