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Old 02-01-09, 09:19 AM   #1
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Week 3: Fly E (0-0) .vs Big Picture (0-1)

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Sunday Night: Battles are set up
Wednesday: Fly E 1 bar
Thursday: Big Picture 2 bars
Friday: Fly E 1 bar
Sunday: Battles Close

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Old 02-02-09, 03:02 PM   #2
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This bluff is far from irrisistable... lil picture bitch i'm like an underground ritual/
My finger is so mystical..... Homie imma scripture The big picture is you dead and we'll keep it habitual/

Irrisistable/Mystical-Mystical means mysterious, ritual is like a ceremony, habitual is a hard happit to break. and scripture we you dumb if you don't no that. That way if anyone says it don't makes sense now you no what the words mean. lol.
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Old 02-02-09, 11:36 PM   #3
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posts deleted. dont fuckin freepost please. And Fly E, dont explain your bars. If you have to do that. Thats telling you, they probably wack too begin with. Everyone in this league has been battlin for a really long time. If they dont get it, its cuz the bar sucks...Big its on you to drop, lets keep this clean. You know what you gotta do.
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Old 02-04-09, 07:37 PM   #4
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i'ze gonna blast this bitch away.. make his chest and a hole equals
but if boy be fly imma just reload and clip the wings off da desert eagles
king of the midwest? u more than frontin
his peeps nicknamed him fly cuz he's always buggin
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Old 02-05-09, 01:07 AM   #5
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Act like you da hardest rapper on here well bitch imma bought to leave ya wit sores/
32-23 no wonder why you aint battle no more.. Were bored and ya floored Dumpin ya ass out a ford, bitch ya styles played you been sayin and swayin da same shit since 04/
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Old 02-05-09, 02:13 AM   #6
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V/ Big. Both Sucked BALLS. big, dude i KNOW you can do better.
whats going on wit you man, you've been droppin weak, u always
got fresh concepts..and just word your lines terribly..

FLY E, i gotta lot of work to do with you...1st of all you did like 8 bars, cuz that last one....wasn't just a punch lmao......2 bars thats it man...not 2 paragraphs full of little rhymes...MAKE PUNCHES. i tried to talk to you about this the other day, what happened to the structure u was using then..why go back to this paragraph shit.

ellevate...both of you...quick
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Old 02-05-09, 10:35 AM   #7
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lol @ picperf sucking after texting for years.

This bluff is far from irrisistable... lil picture bitch i'm like an underground ritual/
My finger is so mystical..... Homie imma scripture The big picture is you dead and we'll keep it habitual/
This shit was all kinds of wrong, it was way too stretched out which has the effect of making a line tend to be boring and lose steem. You also didn't really add a punch and just tried to put random weak multies around. Not a good way to start it off here.
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i'ze gonna blast this bitch away.. make his chest and a hole equals
but if boy be fly imma just reload and clip the wings off da desert eagles
king of the midwest? u more than frontin
his peeps nicknamed him fly cuz he's always buggin
Wow, Pic.. a weak gunplay punch? Your wording was atrociouse and you over all flow was off. I expected way more then this from you even in a 1-2-1 league man. You played out the bug/fly nameplay by using it twice and it showed that you had nothing better to put down. This hurts you a lot in a battle and lets you lose creativity in the eyes of the voters, that plus the wording and over all punch was weak.
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Act like you da hardest rapper on here well bitch imma bought to leave ya wit sores/
32-23 no wonder why you aint battle no more.. Were bored and ya floored Dumpin ya ass out a ford, bitch ya styles played you been sayin and swayin da same shit since 04/
omfg, this was the longest bar that I have ever read in my life.. WTF does dumping his ass out a ford have to do with anything in your verse??? Its retarded to toss shit out a random like this. You should work on shortening your punches to keep the attencion of the readers, the flow in your multies is garbage and off man, you should cut out like 80% of the words that you dont need to get your point across to make your shit atleast flow good .

My vote will go to Picture Perfect for having a more solid verse with a readable structure, please do me a favor and elevate though Pic, you probably haven't done it since that last time we battled or something but after all the battles you've had, people shouldn't be afraid to call a nigga like you a vet. Elevate my dude.

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Old 02-05-09, 11:35 AM   #8
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This bluff is far from irrisistable... lil picture bitch i'm like an underground ritual/
My finger is so mystical..... Homie imma scripture The big picture is you dead and we'll keep it habitual/
okay, this was not good. This merely rhymed and I did not see this being hard hitting


Act like you da hardest rapper on here well bitch imma bought to leave ya wit sores/
32-23 no wonder why you aint battle no more.. Were bored and ya floored Dumpin ya ass out a ford, bitch ya styles played you been sayin and swayin da same shit since
Threat, a barely descent hit...& did not connect well




i'ze gonna blast this bitch away.. make his chest and a hole equals
but if boy be fly imma just reload and clip the wings off da desert eagles
This was a descent hit

king of the midwest? u more than frontin
his peeps nicknamed him fly cuz he's always buggin
This was not that good man....To simplistic



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Old 02-05-09, 11:39 AM   #9
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vote picture......self explanitory
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Old 02-05-09, 01:04 PM   #10
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Wow, Pic.. a weak gunplay punch? Your wording was atrociouse and you over all flow was off. I expected way more then this from you even in a 1-2-1 league man. You played out the bug/fly nameplay by using it twice and it showed that you had nothing better to put down. This hurts you a lot in a battle and lets you lose creativity in the eyes of the voters, that plus the wording and over all punch was weak.
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i used fly in two different ways in the two different bars. so i dont think i played it out. its just already played out, but i didn't care to take anymore time constructing good bars when the other dude didn't even have a clue what he was doing.
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Old 02-05-09, 01:37 PM   #11
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I hear where all you is comin from good feedback
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Old 02-05-09, 01:42 PM   #12
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i used fly in two different ways in the two different bars. so i dont think i played it out. its just already played out, but i didn't care to take anymore time constructing good bars when the other dude didn't even have a clue what he was doing.


its 2 freaking bars man, are you THAT lazy now a days?
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Old 02-05-09, 02:11 PM   #13
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This bluff is far from irrisistable... lil picture bitch i'm like an underground ritual/
My finger is so mystical..... Homie imma scripture The big picture is you dead and we'll keep it habitual/
very wack^

i'ze gonna blast this bitch away.. make his chest and a hole equals
but if boy be fly imma just reload and clip the wings off da desert eagles
king of the midwest? u more than frontin
his peeps nicknamed him fly cuz he's always buggin
^pretty simple, still effective

Act like you da hardest rapper on here well bitch imma bought to leave ya wit sores/
32-23 no wonder why you aint battle no more.. Were bored and ya floored Dumpin ya ass out a ford, bitch ya styles played you been sayin and swayin da same shit since 04/
^ wack again, a little more harsh tho

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Old 02-05-09, 03:18 PM   #14
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its 2 freaking bars man, are you THAT lazy now a days?

haha, give me a break. i'll be gettin back into the swing of things, i got school and shit, and i didnt need to go hard. i did decent the first weak. everyone has their own opinion anyway, so not everyone respects the same shit in this league anyway, and im not going to waste my time trying to change what i think is creative some people may or may not respect on here. thats why not every battle has an obvious winner eventhough almost every battle should usually be that way.
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Old 02-06-09, 01:24 PM   #15
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This battle was pretty lame, pictures second punch was awful but he was facing like a 4 year old that can't type so he ended up winning.

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