This is a quick Keystyle/mini song i was just fuckin wit, i was just thinkin of some off the wall shit and kept on goin out of bordem.


SHOCK THERAPY NIGGAZ!


chrs: shock therapy!!you'll be shocked at what you read
please believe im not your ordinary mc
my thoughts been flipped about 100 degreez
you be tha judge who needs the therapy you or me


even with a plastic knife i'll still cut you up//
a cannibal who lectured hannibal on what spice adds the right touch//
then i'll boil you up, but if thats not enough to hurt you//
i'll spill ya gutz when you rap, put a fruit in ya mouth and still serve you//
maybe im sick, tempature says im not that either//
so fuckin a black mexican, mixed with asian
won't get me rainbow fever??//
now my kid looks foreriegn, speaks spanish and smokes nothin but refer//
bows after he talk, and wears dickies, with a wife beater//
i'll even pretend im jesus and purposely mis lead you//
tell you to wait in the desert, and wont even meet you//
nothin but skelatons left, dried up cause of dehydraition//
tell ya family, you left me, cause you was being impatient//
im the tyson of mics, bite both ears and leave the blood smearing//
send you a gift from prison, and inside is 2 earrings//
even if the crowd was cheering, i'll stll boo myself//
quickly kick my own ass with out anyones help//
some how rock bottom my self, F 5ved, and then apply the pedigree//
it makes sense, cause lyricly no body else can defeat me//
neatly, ain't me, shit im the opposite//
opened my door, and saw elton john with eminem in my closet//
yeah i get fucked up,even with out the chronic//
the only 24 yearold you know, thats hooked on phonics//
dead, cell brains, the membrain, out leakin, da head//
can somebody e-mail me, and tell me what the fuck i said//
not just lyrical but a scientifical genious//
made a breakthrough chemical and turned my own sperm pinkish//
the nigga with the most dos of lethal injection//
verbally infested with shit that hasn't yet been tested//
invite you to a funenaral, and put ya name on the guest list//
kill then bury you with out anyone suspectin shit//
wirte the article and title it: Oh-Bitch-U-Hairy//
reapeat the chorus, and tell me who needs the therapy

that shit was tight

keep flowin

yo i liked how how dis wuz written fo realz.Its a good way to prove yaself of sumthin.Whole thing wuz off tha rimrocka,keep writin.Stay^
-Avi

yo this was nice dawg..had some coo, and funny ass parts in it! i like this shit....good flow and just funny to me...lol...keep it up yo!

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that shit was wack because u rap like every other average netcee

^^^^What are u talkin about barney dis shit was aight yo all da kid needs to do is holla at me and i'll help if elevation is needed i'm OUTTY ~1~

this rhyme was tight-n-flowed well off da read....mos def...vrey visual thoughts in there......keep posting n i'll keep peepin'em

This piece was nice
i liked the word play
plus you stayed on point so
nice
^^^^^^^^