u kno da rulez........

10-15 barz(( 1 line = 1 bar))
u spit first
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checking in sorry bout last night i was having a party

heres ma verse
I shoot 'Specific' rhymes that'll poisoin your bloodstream,//1
Rippin ya so bad, the nurses called for metamorphine,//2
Naviagtin' my rhymes thru' yo' chest N' into yo' spleen,//3
Explodin' fr0m da inside, leavin' organs all ova yo' computa screen,//4
Runnin dynamite strings through your intestines, leavin' ya 'cured' with 'Gh3nki's Medicines',//5
You enetered rehab for a lyrical healin',//6
But Gh3nki found ya, N' started to create mo' internal bleedin',//7
Once this 'surgery's' ova(over) imma make sure you ain't da one proceedin',//8
Injectin deadly fluids titled 'Specificz Ain't Suceedin',//9
This malpractice is occurin' N' imma make sure it ain't relievin,//10
You thinkin you gun' win is a lie, its straight deceiven,//11
If you dont think imma advance, then you better start believin,//12
In this verse, I to0k your balls, dont't even try N' retrieve-em,//13
Imma finish you off by takin' mah Tech N' just keep on squeezin,//14

yo

U hooked on Phonicz cuz u dunt kno how ta read, \\1//
But wen i stab wif ma rhymes u surely kno how ta bleed// \\2//
Im causin spial damage cuz ma rhymez really bend~ya, \\3//
Afta diz u gonna b da top poster in WHACKNESS EMERGENCY CEN~TER// \\4//
U n me both kno dat ur talent is small, \\5//
Just 4 fun, u dress in ya mom pantiez n start playin RU PAUL// \\6//
I got hitz like Jet~Li, datz y dey call me da "ONE" \\7//
Knock ur teeth out wen i hitchu wif da butt of my gun// \\8//
Aint no complex, son, ur verses iz simple \\9//
My 9 like NOXZEMA cuz dey b poppin ya pimples// \\10//
Get out of ma face man, cuz im sick of u herbs, \\11//
Have on ya back bleedin cuz i killed u w/ verbz// \\12//
Afta viewin dese barz voterz gona say dat i RIPPED~IT, \\13//
Have u "CAPPED" mo timez dn a model showin off FIT~TEDS// \\14//

Damn fellaz, I liked this battle. It was a good one. Let me start this off:

Black:

Ya shit was tight son. Ya first line was nice....

I shoot 'Specific' rhymes that'll poisoin your bloodstream,//1
Rippin ya so bad, the nurses called for metamorphine,//2
^^^^nice punch and wordplay

An ya last line was a good close....

In this verse, I to0k your balls, dont't even try N' retrieve-em,//13
Imma finish you off by takin' mah Tech N' just keep on squeezin,//14

Skitzo:

Ya wordplay here in ya verse was tha ish. My favorites lines....

Im causin spial damage cuz ma rhymez really bend~ya, \\3//
Afta diz u gonna b da top poster in WHACKNESS EMERGENCY CEN~TER// \\4//
^^^^ nice punch

Aint no complex, son, ur verses iz simple \\9//
My 9 like NOXZEMA cuz dey b poppin ya pimples//
^^^ nice shit

Both of ya'll had good flow, wordplay, and verses. It was a good battle, and close one. Skitzo's verse had better punches that hit harder.

My vote = Skitzo

Nice battle tho ya'll.

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1-0, uppin 4 votez

ok battle not bad, but not really hard on punches from both emcees. Some commom played word were randomly used in both emcees spit too. but I call skitzo nicca tha winna of this one, He came better by a fuckin shoelace, wit a little more heat on the shit that he spit. V::Skitzo

OuTtIe

This shit is gonna get closed quick if yal don't start voting and throwin down ya links!

2-0 uppin 4 a KO

yo skizo you won i should have took my time instead of rusing ma self to make a quick verse in like 5 minuter

DAMMIT! Y U GIVE UP! I WANTED A KO!!!!!!!!!!!!!

say you got a ko take the ko