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Through a metafisical pen, angels infect my sense/
Through spirits these lyrics start to mend/ The injection of my soul through a blistering cold/ Through a monotonous winter as frozen imagerys unfold/ As margens turn to mental vessels and ink turns to thoughts/ I’m caught in the multitude of ghost while boo’s start to haunt/ A consistant burning of bridges give wings for my villians/ As my path is ashes and my feet stop living/ As a virgin is to defeat, I am to destiny/ Through a mirror I see angels in black pointing at the heavenly/ While hipocracy rules the planet and the paranormal/ I stay strong like a sea to the coral/ I look into the digits of time to see if the truth is revealed/ But its hidden and forbidden, signed and sealed/ But the explicit lyrics outerlimits the gimmiec/ While we act like critics we take frozen thoughts and diminsh/ So as we throw originality and give portions to the wind/ We realize religion isnt exact and were not born with sins/ http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...1221#post301221 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...1227#post301227 |
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IP: B20F 67F7
this shit is good the beggining wanted me to stop readding till the 6 line all the rest was ill good job keep elevting
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IP: F321 1086
nice metaphors, nice concept, nice imager and a decent flow and multis.....i liked this
a good abstract drop Quote:
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IP: 0ABF 0746
thx for the feedback
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