It's Broken Watches,keep your eyes open,cuz most kats don't know what time it is but i'ma let them know......

there's no inventin time/spinnin mindss i'ma a troubled mine/rockin lines like sun dial descriptions/back and forth letter for letter like pen pal traditions/pencils with len imprisoned/repeatitive retrospect of life is just a shred of wisdom/batter your decapitated head fragments/head bangers that'll sent stagnet/acting is your source of image/feelin my souls crashin trade it in a minute/constantly releasing neck crackers like necklaces that are made of biscuits/embed my visions add up my choices supportin options/illuminate and duplicate light the day offers/shockin like stickin forks in sockets/you couldn't make up for lost time if you covered a misplaced foriegn watch with lipstick and eyeliner/i strike like under paid workers and high risers/in office spaces/i'm slept on like sheets and pillow cases/if i don't pull your card its simply cuz i only deal with aces/against facists numerous forms of haters in races/try to fade me and your shows end up cancelled like raffles/with stubs and rhymes are scrammbled/in a house where things are badly handled/you makin rain checks?/keep proppin yourself with the same sets/when you gonna realize i'm live and you fake like hollywood plane wrecks
yo it's Narcicyst open your optics/Patrick Bateman microphone collosus/murder your timing like i broke your watches/close your office/to further notice and refine your skill/global watches i own cuz the time i kill
i flow spurts like vein splatter/got strange manners/in this life enforced you dicked like an arranged marriage/money can make you kill your own like benay ramzi's deranged parents/follow shit you boys and parents teach you like trained parrots/you hella embarrasin/i get beefed like cake batter/make moves and shake after/with your fake laughter/pretend that you understand my rhymes like you live below me/claim beef on cuts but you creep with a sandwich filled with baloney/shape shifted to my mom hungered me and couldn't hold me/stop clock bars and your limited power/my lines so pure usually confused with Dominican powder.....

Raising diseaed beef like a british farmers land...Narcicyst

yo dis waznt dat bad,flowed nice,but sum parts coulda been mo complex,dat biscuit line i waznt feelin,but to each his own,keep uppin,nice drop,1

thanks for the feedback...as far as being more complex no offense to anyone i drop more complex metaphors than any newbie...gain thanks for the feedback...one


my metaphors are metafives/my styles groping you raw dawg little boy you get fucked like pedaphiles...Rass Kass

nice had a good flow but could u space it out, its a bitch to read

You always drop dope shit.....ain't been here in a min but you still reppin'......are they still sleepin' on you? anyway nice drop.....i was feelin' the make up line it made me laugh the the necklace made of biscuits....hahahhahah dope shit dog

thanks spitz..you drop hot shit all the time too...dont know why people aint feelin the metas though, guess they aint into them...fuck it...keepin spittin dunny nd thnks for the feedback...one