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Old 02-14-03, 05:50 PM   #1
MR. LEGEND
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MR. LEGEND vs CHASE

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Rules
Best outta 5
3-0 TKO
10-15 Bars max
Fair votes (no crazy ish)

Make you a has been, so ain’t no gettin' back/1
Blue & Black lumber jack, rag ta match clutchin the killaz axe/2
Like a bad runnin back try to run and get smacked/3
I put crack in ya crown, you fall causin' cracks in the ground/4
I'm like thunder, put the pen down, then you hear a crackling sound/5
You wasting my time?, sorta like conversations with mimes/6
Ya bland lines, with no spine, not quite the sensation as mines/7
Land mine rhymes, give you vacation from time/8
I'ma shine like a diamond cluster, I will dust ya/9
With lyrical data treats, over the baddest beats/10
Remove ya feet you can’t compete, in this lyrical track meet/11
Ya boys is from the backstreets, claimin new kids on the block/12
My niggaz ill will ta survive, ruff ride with the strength of a ROC/13
 
Old 02-19-03, 03:36 PM   #2
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Old 02-20-03, 03:21 PM   #3
Chase
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10 - 15 but you did 13 lines
Rip you with out a trace like my power is divine
I'll doctor up ya lips like a plastic surgan
Pop ya head like the cherry inside of a virgan
You under stand this is like A pit agianst a rat
Claw ya digen deep and leave holes in side ya hat
Now this is whats happens when under estamate
Drink ya milk ya'll cause i'm bout to bake this cake
I'm like an amtrack train
Run you over twice untill i see ya brain
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Old 02-20-03, 04:11 PM   #4
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Old 02-20-03, 04:29 PM   #5
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Vote = MR. LEGEND

Both flowed well, but both were pretty weak. I voted legend just cos he attempted what looked like some weak multis.

Both can learn and improve upon this i think.

Peace.
 
Old 02-20-03, 04:34 PM   #6
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yo my vote goes to mr legend...the battle was kinda weak but i like his internals.....so vote=Mr. Legend
 
Old 02-20-03, 05:25 PM   #7
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diz battle waz kinda weak, but imma go wif Legend, cuz hiz punches were harder, n hiz flo waz betta. Chase flow lacked everythan needed 2 make a verse.........

LEGEND
Make you a has been, so ain’t no gettin' back/1
Blue & Black lumber jack, rag ta match clutchin the killaz axe/2
^^didnt git dat line

Like a bad runnin back try to run and get smacked/3
I put crack in ya crown, you fall causin' cracks in the ground/4
^^alrite, i guess

I'm like thunder, put the pen down, then you hear a crackling sound/5
You wasting my time?, sorta like conversations with mimes/6
Ya bland lines, with no spine, not quite the sensation as mines/7
^^line 6 whaz good

Land mine rhymes, give you vacation from time/8
I'ma shine like a diamond cluster, I will dust ya/9
With lyrical data treats, over the baddest beats/10
Remove ya feet you can’t compete, in this lyrical track meet/11
^^good

Ya boys is from the backstreets, claimin new kids on the block/12
My niggaz ill will ta survive, ruff ride with the strength of a ROC/13
^^datz an alrite endin 4 hiz verse...........

CHASE:
Rip you with out a trace like my power is divine
I'll doctor up ya lips like a plastic surgan
Pop ya head like the cherry inside of a virgan
^^line 1 didnt rhyme wif nethang at all

You under stand this is like A pit agianst a rat
Claw ya digen deep and leave holes in side ya hat
^^dat line iz played

Now this is whats happens when under estamate
Drink ya milk ya'll cause i'm bout to bake this cake
^^alrite

I'm like an amtrack train
Run you over twice untill i see ya brain
^^ok, i guess

flow=LEGEND
meta4'z/creativity=Legend
punches=Legend

vote=Legend
 
Old 02-21-03, 03:00 PM   #8
Chase
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yeah i admit this was not my best battle soo after you win this one How about a rematch 15-20 lines I was in a rush yesterday if you don't want to thats cool holla at ya girl
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Old 02-21-03, 05:00 PM   #9
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Mr. Legend Winz
This was not my best either
Holla at me next week mayn
 
 


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