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revenge...
IP: 08ED 651C
gunshots blasting The bullets passing...
lashing and into heads they crashing... i move slowly as i cross over the lot... listen to my headphones blasting this pac... then fuck...i see two shots buried in my mom... i grab her chest and see her bleeding from her arm... alarmed she was perfect no one to be harmed... she died right there laying in my arms... i thought to myself damn this fucking shit sucks... looking for revenge i seeked to fuck that bitch up... and thats how it started... started out my day the 9 tucked in my waist... looking for this bitch disgrace ready to choose his fate... end his days make his family dismay at the way... i put the 9 to his face a thief ready to take his life away... if i only could find him I’ve looked for months... my hate escalates each day ready to leave him fucked... then came the moment when i came face to face... to the man that took an innocent woman’s life away... i see the bitch in his eyes and get ready to do the same... endebted to me this bitch is gonna have to pay... i lead him on to the site this bitch I’m ready to make his grave... i cant believe this shit he took my mother at such young an age... I came from behind him and slapped his face with the tech… Put my grip on his neck then I felt a burn in my chest… What the heck backward I began to step… Holes were apparent my body was a prison the blood began to fled…. It burned and as my body bled… I blacked out and felt what its like to be dead… Came back… As a ghost with unfinished business destined for revenge… I was a real person with touch and feel but with the air I would blend… Dreams to take his neck and bend make his bitch life end… I reminisce to the day I looked at my bloody mom filled with like ten… Rage mixes with pain as I float through the sky searching… Ready to find this kat and act like his dad give him the opposite of birthing… I hope he dies hurting then I see him with a glimpse by his curtains… I almost explode with rage to this ignorant shit hes blurting… “yea I popped this bitch nigga at the yard…haha..he was a queer g…” I screamed ima fuckin ring ya neck bitch cant ya hear me… Then he proceeds “I beat and raped this bitch a few months back”… And older woman said its peeps like me that make her ashamed to be black… I thought that was wack so I shot her and left her there in the cold bleeding… And I watched her son come and hold her while he was screaming… At this point I was fed up I ripped his skin with the razors sharp edge… And left his body at his moms her looks were enough revenge… A kodak moment as she saw that bitch of man on the floor dead… and the rush i got was amazing as i looked at his head and it poured red... revenge can kill you... try not to seek it... if you do finish what you start...
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Ill shit.
Creative as hell. Keep it up dawg. Peace. |
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IP: C08C A1FD
Tight... this was real nice. Very creative. Had me feelin' it. The only error I see is that you said that you had a 9 on ya', then you said you hit him with the tech? No diss, s$$t was nice. Just thought I'd point it out to ya. Peace...
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