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Old 02-26-03, 10:57 PM   #1
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revenge...

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gunshots blasting The bullets passing...
lashing and into heads they crashing...
i move slowly as i cross over the lot...
listen to my headphones blasting this pac...
then fuck...i see two shots buried in my mom...
i grab her chest and see her bleeding from her arm...
alarmed she was perfect no one to be harmed...
she died right there laying in my arms...
i thought to myself damn this fucking shit sucks...
looking for revenge i seeked to fuck that bitch up...

and thats how it started...

started out my day the 9 tucked in my waist...
looking for this bitch disgrace ready to choose his fate...
end his days make his family dismay at the way...
i put the 9 to his face a thief ready to take his life away...
if i only could find him I’ve looked for months...
my hate escalates each day ready to leave him fucked...
then came the moment when i came face to face...
to the man that took an innocent woman’s life away...
i see the bitch in his eyes and get ready to do the same...
endebted to me this bitch is gonna have to pay...
i lead him on to the site this bitch I’m ready to make his grave...
i cant believe this shit he took my mother at such young an age...
I came from behind him and slapped his face with the tech…
Put my grip on his neck then I felt a burn in my chest…
What the heck backward I began to step…
Holes were apparent my body was a prison the blood began to fled….
It burned and as my body bled…
I blacked out and felt what its like to be dead…

Came back…

As a ghost with unfinished business destined for revenge…
I was a real person with touch and feel but with the air I would blend…
Dreams to take his neck and bend make his bitch life end…
I reminisce to the day I looked at my bloody mom filled with like ten…
Rage mixes with pain as I float through the sky searching…
Ready to find this kat and act like his dad give him the opposite of birthing…
I hope he dies hurting then I see him with a glimpse by his curtains…
I almost explode with rage to this ignorant shit hes blurting…
“yea I popped this bitch nigga at the yard…haha..he was a queer g…”
I screamed ima fuckin ring ya neck bitch cant ya hear me…
Then he proceeds “I beat and raped this bitch a few months back”…
And older woman said its peeps like me that make her ashamed to be black…
I thought that was wack so I shot her and left her there in the cold bleeding…
And I watched her son come and hold her while he was screaming…
At this point I was fed up I ripped his skin with the razors sharp edge…
And left his body at his moms her looks were enough revenge…
A kodak moment as she saw that bitch of man on the floor dead…
and the rush i got was amazing as i looked at his head and it poured red...


revenge can kill you...
try not to seek it...
if you do finish what you start...
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Old 02-27-03, 01:55 AM   #2
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Ill shit.
Creative as hell.
Keep it up dawg.

Peace.
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Old 02-27-03, 04:21 AM   #3
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Tight... this was real nice. Very creative. Had me feelin' it. The only error I see is that you said that you had a 9 on ya', then you said you hit him with the tech? No diss, s$$t was nice. Just thought I'd point it out to ya. Peace...
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