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Old 02-26-03, 10:08 PM   #1
chemistry
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you aint nothin

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your claiming that your a vettrin but you act like a rookie
if you stepped to me i'd eat you up
like you was nothin but a cookie
your nothin but a rookie claimin to be a pro
but in reality your nothin but a ho
your kinda like artifical light you got your on and off time
if you stepped to me i'd turn you off like a switch
your nothin but a bitch claimin to be a man
but in reality your like the little engine that could sayin i think i can
but if you coulda it would of been done nigger
your like a car with no engine tryin go some where
or a earth with no atmosphere
your like a rap artist with no lyrics tryin to make it to the top
your like a run away train that just wont stop
with your weak ass shit your like a basket ball game with no ball a sky dive with no fall
your like a blunt with no trees a boat with no seas
a cure without a disease
your like an engine that just seized
you ant going no were unless you get carried
your like being alive an berried
your like tryin to run a marathon with no legs
your like tryin to play cribidge with no cards and pegs
do you get it your just brainless you aint shit
you better get on sombodys dick and let them carry you to the top cuase thats the only way ya'll make it there
your a coward a foney and a queer all compactid into one this shits over im done
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Old 02-26-03, 10:22 PM   #2
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Very simplistic. Seems like you put no effort into this.
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Old 02-27-03, 05:16 AM   #3
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Simplistic... and right here
'your kinda like artifical light you got your on and off time
if you stepped to me i'd turn you off like a switch'

it didn't even rhyme... this was wack. Keep workin' at it if this is something you wanna do for a livin'. If ya have something to give us... show it... put more effort into it... aiight... Peace...
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