I was trying to be creative here... tell me what you think... check it...

Yo, if rap’s like basketball then I got mad handle,
spitting slick rhymes to break anyone’s ankles,
with these verbal examples,/
I be the MVP, slash illest MC, as you can see/
I be the fucking point guard,
too hard for all these rappers who’s game is too brittle,
see me dribble, down the middle and then shit-all… over y’all, getting sick of these calls,
man I ain’t fouling y’all,
or traveling at all, fuck y’all,/
It's all nonsense, feel my concept,
straight from the eastern conference,
let me tell you man my offence, is often,/
impossible, to stop-at-all,
I’m quick to fucking hassle-y’all…

It’s over, my cross-over,
go through shoulders,
leave heads like they not sober,/
have them falling, stumbling,
inaccurately functioning,
all while I’m dunking in… their faces,
with these verses, many cases/
man I slam like Kasam,
half man half amazing like Vince Carter,
my plan is to advance as the lead starter,
blazing my rhymes a bit harder...
then all the competition, through all the sport’s season,
I score with raw precision, I ball beyond description,
and all is non-fiction/
now let me stop bragging, said I got it,
let me show you that I have it…

I’m ah shake you, break you,
take you to the net,
and never let you get…
this ball in my hand, upset you with a sham,
you’re not a player, you’re an obsessed fan,
like Em’s Stan, just an upset man, who can’t stand…
the fact, that you’re really just whack,
and cannot handle the rock,/
so just stay on the bench, or get drenched,
with the imminent stench...
of defeat, in bottled in my spit,
got up now straddle to your sit,/
cause dawg you ain’t thirsty,
long from fucking worthy,
to rock this jersey and shorts,
so let me keep this shit short,
if you ain’t fit for this sport,
then take your ass off the court/
I bet you sweat, soon as it gets to the net,
from three-point land I hit it nothing but net/
some come on, let’s get it on,
I street ball like And-1,
taking on bout any one…

The streets have taught me this sport,
my feet don’ touched every court,/
from Rucker Park in Harlem,
to Madison Square Garden, and it’s harden…
my skills, a great deal, for real,/
so now I got my street game face,
to leave the mic piece blazed,
with both my Nikes lased,
and all my rhymes in place,
to leave your team disgraced/
ain’t it amazing how I’m blazing the scene,
standing awake while you’re still chasing a dream,
and while you’re searching I’m still facing the rim,
rock in my hand ready to place this thing in…

And that's that... thanx for reading... peace

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yo i think its phat how you compared rapin to b ball

you should try it wit different stuf

like compare stuff not just rythming you no like two different topics you could probily come up wit some cool shit.

HOLY SHIT!!!!!!!!... This is the most slept on ILL piece on the fuckin SITE!!!... If I see this dropping again without replies I'm makin this a sticky for you Alias... this is fuckin Dope... it had me saying OOOOOHHH throughout the fuckin piece. Wow, nice drop. My bad to have been sleepin on this I've just been helpin a lot tryin to get the site improved and shit. Damn good drop! I was feeling this topic a lot and you flow was amazing I had it going perfect. Damn! You're one of the most slept on I think... Let's get some replies to this beast.

pz

My bad I would have stickied this earlier... but I was temporarily demodded for some misunderstanding...

NOW REPLY TO THIS PEOPLE

Man he's right i seen so many views and hardly any replies. dis shit wuz tight and u look like u good wit da concept of comparison. i think this is an ill piece being slept on. gotta give u props i know if u spit this flow verbally people gone feel it. keep elevatin playa n don't hesitate to comment on my pieces. ONE

thats just undescribable by words... but i'll try, ill fresh dope, hella, nope it doesnt work... keep it up, it people that flow like you that make rookies like me wanna improve

I'm happy to see that someone dropped a piece thats worth more than guns and shit.....This piece IS Ill with a capital fuckin I....Representing the east like a beast with no leash....Keep it Gangsta my nigga....Holla

thanx y'all, preciate that... yo Domain, damm dawg, I though u was jokin bout this sticky shit.... thanx dawg! Peace

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No prob man, I personally thought this was ill as fuck and getting too much mattress time. I decided to clean up the bullshit too like freeposts such as Madd Professor's or shall I say CStim or however it's spelled... pz
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Man, that shit is nice, you feelin the ill flows, keep that shit up dogg, I like!

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well done again,pimped out delivery n ova~all flow,stayed 2getha throughout da whole damn thang,make a nigga wanna b.o.l,keep doin yo thang,stay up,1

yo this was madd tight, serious flow and good rhymes the skill is appreciated...holla 1

yo alias ya no i like your rhymes, this is the illest yet keep it up peace.

i dont usually like concept peices like this, specially about sports...but this was actually workin really well....flowed nice and made alotta sense...nice peice...