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Old 03-02-03, 06:34 PM   #1
Tony D
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The True One

IP: D102 6A1E

Off the top of my dome/
Capone holds the throne/
Makin you realize the tone/
make u wanna go back home/

Im the crime boss/
like the teflon Don, first name jon, the true con/
so call me a rap phenominom/

Ill run through like a train/
leavin the biggest stain, in the brain/
all you feel is pain, from all the rain/

For now i did my good deed/
but ill come out swingin like apollo creed/
tryin to show my skills/
but not showin off, leave you with a cough/
till next time.PEACE
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Old 03-03-03, 12:24 AM   #2
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wasn't really feelin that, but keep postin


Peace
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Old 03-03-03, 12:24 AM   #3
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Hahahaha
This is why 1st graders shouldnt write rap lyrics....
u get this WEAK BASIC shit...
fuckin finger painting by 4yr olds looks more complex then this shit


Work on it rookie


Peace.....
1.........


Ps: stay the fuck out Raw's Open Mic
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