10-20 bars
due by wensday
3-0 ko
5 votes wins

u first

Check the rules: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=32673

You named yourself the wrong name, but I’ll never have to reveal. (1)
You said it yourself, this battles like your name, it’s a Done Deal (2)//
Calls himself double D, is that breast size or grade average (3)
You blowing dick as often as little lesbian rabbits eat cabbage (4)//
Often! Times my rhymes are extremely nutritious and vicious (5)
But if you Back talk again your teeth will look more crooked then fabulous’s (6)
“D”umb and “D”umber, either way sleeps with the fishes (7)
Luka Brotzi, Godfather shit, ya’ll know it’s militias(8)
Rub that lamp bitch cause you only get three wishes(9)
Wish #1. .........you wish you were the illest (10)
Wish# 2 ...... you wish you were gifted(11)
Wish# 3, you know that its over, blow me bitch, sick and twisted//
(12)
Out of wishes now kid, suck it up, lucks only with 3 leaf clovers(13)
Riding in your wannabe dream like range rover(14)//
I’ve only dropped 13 lines, you’ve just enterd and exited your prime(14)
Drop something hot, maybe someday you’ll climb, but for right now you rapping is a crime(15)
The end of the round bell just chimed, cuts or dimes, is all that’s on my mind(16)
I hope you know this was the shit that I dropped high,(17)
its over,so go back in time and rewind.(18)
For now the only thing I can say is good luck and GOOD-BYE// (19)

Your turn kid

I made you like can food i left your ingredients on the bacc//
no one would buy jus cause ya whole appearence is wacc//
im used to eatin MCs like a bad habbit//
like gay pimps im constantly smaccin this faggit//
ur rhymes are anoying like waking up to alarm clocks//
im laughin while watching u lose to my writers block//

you cant win u couldnt beat paralyzed people in a race//
ur a weakling youll have ur body parts tied like lace//
ill kick ur spine n jump on ur bacc like a trampeline//
each bar that im spittin im sh!tin on ur self esteem//
im repeatedly kick this cat like field goals//
the way im rippin this cat apart makes the rodney king beating seem legal//

wen u try to shine the light gets bounced bacc like light reflectors//
hell be leavin this battle wit more cuts then angry directors//
slap this bitch in his bacc so it aint easy to start frontin//
testin me is like playin wit a remote u pushin my buttons//
dirt is a factor for wen u die cuz ull be in some//
if dicks were taxes jjs mouth would be a big source of in-cum//!

im hurtin ur feelins but it aint worse then the pain u physically feeling//
cuz ur gettin kicked in the head from 3 angles while kneeling//


i beat this nigga to death n beat him to life put him in a box n seal it//
my swords are power ill stab the box so u can feel it//...

writers block is a bitch

uppin for votes

1-0 Done Deal

still uppin for votes meng

Yo That Battle WasKinda Weak. JJ's Drop Was Alright but he lost it with this Line...
Drop something hot, maybe someday you’ll climb, but for right now you rapping is a crime(15). Real Whack Line
My Vote Goos to Done Deal
Vote=Done Deal

that line was whack, but im only just starting, love the competition keep em coming

Oh yeah and anyone uppin for votes lacks self confidence, regardless win or lose i'll take you again right after D.D, i'm gonna make you my bitch

had to go with Done Deal on this one - JJ had it with the personals at the beginning then DD made it even with the trampoline line.

but the in-cum line at the end killed it. vote: DD (already clicked the poll)

vote other battles, don't just wait for your own

YO DAT WUZ A DONE DEAL. IM GIVIN DIS 1 2 MA NIGGA DONE DEAL DIS MAN WUZ THROWIN MAD PUNCH LINES.DA 1 DAT KILLED IT WUZ DIS 1: "THE WAY IM RIPPIN DIS KID APART MAKES DA RODNEY KING BEATIN SEEM LEGAL"
- LIKE I SAID DIS GOES 2 "DONE DEAL"
PEACE. ONE MIC

dis battle was week but if yall read closely i was on writers block

writers block- basically means ur in the twilight zone u cant think of sh!t like u went retarded for a day

stop sleepin n vote ppl