(starts off talking)
Look it..you want anything in life...you gotta do it ya self
fuck the haters, the fuckin herbs..your you..not no fuckin body else.
stop bein a bitch..an getcha head up in the game....

C-
Hustlen aint a natural thing, it summin you gotta create
its hard to pop up an spring a hustle that can acumulate
but at this rate..half the people i know gun turn out fake
all because they are eatin from somebody elses cake

i grow up slow no tellin which way i was determind to grow didnt follow in nobodys shadow
just did my own flow stayed adictected to hydro blessed to make it out the dusty ghetto
game was my fortune rhymes were just part of my evils abortion to stay happy while hustlen
game was all bout musclen an chosen ya right path so i studied in math to get way from smugglen
tasted my temptations grew to see my graduations for every occasion i tryed to be blazen
never behind nobody stayed off probation followed my heart wit no hesitation of not seein amazing
carry my hopes an goals on my shoulders rollin life like a true soldjer even wen lifes colder
i stay strong an heavy crush my boundries wit'a mind boulder put my thoughts in'a folder
amusement to see others around me negletin there brain puttin there mind in poverty
it astounds me lyrically wen people say there hungry but aint worthy to work for money
as a young man on the side line you see a lot, people you hang wit holden the block
like molecules to our body they dont seem to no thing die slow fish dont alwez flop
so i just sit an watch as the glory sinks in that im hustlen for a win
a good time to begin
from breaking free from the hidden an reach out to the forbiddin an bein trapped is good riddens

Hustlen aint a natural thing, it summin you gotta create
its hard to pop up an spring a hustle that can acumulate
but at this rate..half the people i know gun turn out fake
all because they are eatin from somebody elses cake

im sick an tired of people bein admired when they dont work for shit but they showered
an litte homies scared to get grades cuz they wont fit in so they lose on there minds power
lookin like a coward all cuz'a bein pussy but actin hot isnt seriously a good aspect at all
when you can move like a rabbit but instead you move like a turtle an just crawl
it doesnt make sence like a dumb ass written sommin wit suspence
or a midget jumpen a 8 foot fence give me a minute to calculate mind fregments
as i smash my thoughts into your brain for bein lame an keep your style
in the cement to not be anything if u just wud'a worked for awhile
went the extra mile
you cud'a made ya heart smile instead you tryed to be summin that your not
so you never gunna no who you really are is that the way got intended our plots
i dont think so, we al lgotta free soul so stop lettin it be controlled
hit the booked dont be scared to let ya mind unfold an go on the honourol
just do ye own thing, make ye own street bling rep ya own style
cuz ya crew ya rep
they ya respect not the kids wit the ill sneaks they ones who give ye a life of neglect
be ya self its the best way to over come the heat of the unshining sun
it gives ya life fun an a reason to prove your own demon break free an be numba 1

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Open Mics
The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461

damn dude u ripped that shit up. the wordplay was superb, the vocab was great, the content was excellent, the topic was hella original, and overall i dont think i could point out a bad part in that post. i really enjoyed readin that, keep it up man.

peace.....

yeah this was a good peice i thought, also a good read, your wordplay was real good, along with your vocab, your content was good as well, overall id say it was a pretty good peice, keep dropping.

Definately a good drop...

Good vocab and worplay...

Concept was aight....
Flow fell off here and there...

But overall- good drop

il;l reply in mornng...too tired for reading

not trying to be mean in any way, but this was like another Lose Yourself.. and to me that means a great song (text in your case)

i cant find anything lacking in here
flow, wordplay, and espically vocab were straight off the hook
loved it man

if you would be so kind
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82007

thanks ye all uppen

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Open Mics
The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461

uppen dont sleep on this.zzzzzzzzzzz

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Open Mics
The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461

goooooooooooooooood shit.keep it up.holla



CTF(represent)

that was the shit. i cant wait till my stuff becomes that good. i liked the word usage to

thanks uppen..fr feedback thst will help me...peace

__________________
Open Mics
The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461