~Death Incorporated~

i see me in a box, my reflection is death ~PERSONIFIED~
my words are murder weapons, bloody and ~DEMONIFIED~
leave victims ~TRAUMATIZED~, my language is a ~STEAMED BULL~
cuz I murdered every letter that I learned back in ~PRE-SCHOOL~
i SEEP THRU the ~ESSANCE~ of litterary's ~INTESTINES~
and "shit out" ~RECKLESS~ words that shatter ~PERFECTIONS~
cut words ~IN SECTIONS~ and leave letters with ~INCISIONS~
~IN WRITTENS~ I twist plots, and hide every ~INTENTION~
my mouth is in ~DETENTION~ the rest of me is ~IN JAIL~
stab my lyrics with ~TEN NAILS~ and hammer em ~IN HELL~
words are weapons, my bullets have ~HOLLOW TIPS~
so I can kill ~POL-A-TICS~ when I make the laws ~SWALLOW SCRIPTS~
ALL OF THIS, is MuRdER in the ~FORM OF TEXT~
action in the ~FORM OF REST~, and words in the ~HORNS OF DEATH~
i ride on the ~HORSE OF WAR~, I've ridden this ~COURSE BEFORE~
I'm exposed to the English language, and i use at a ~SOURCE TO ROAR~
an ~EXCUSE~ to ~PRODUCE~ sentances that ~REDUCE~
words int fragments, and fragments into ~RECLUSE~,
I ~SEDUCE~ letters, and RAPE EM with a ~SHARP TOUNGE~
I breathe in lyrics, Ive got a raw throat and a ~SCARRED LUNG~
the ~HARP's DONE~, peace has left, it's ~OVERRATED~
letetrs dance with black magic, Im an agent of DEATH ~INCORPORATED~

get rid of all those "~" things and just write it normally, quite a decent attempt, whack some formatting on there and keep rhymin

umm hello is anyone here alive this is HOT shit

I'm feelin' this flow. Same thing as other dude though, get rid of those little lines around your letters, that shit makes it hard to read... kind of whack.