this is unfinshed work, it was ment for audio so it kinda difficult to read thru, but let me know what y'all think


Life’s a bitch but you gotta stick with it//
Don’t quit it, so you can say that you did it//
The best thing in life, you gotta get it//
It takes time, it won’t happen in a minute//
You don’t wanna look back and have regrets//
So take bets, and make threats, pay debts//
see how much better your days get//
you gotta last, so grab them opportunities up fast//
don’t let em pass, it’ll be a kick in the ass//
when you realize what you coulda had//
it’s not what you did in the past, it’s the future that counts//
when you in trouble, don’t bounce, deal with your problems//
solve em, then dissolve em, need help, you got friends, so call em//
niggas tryin put you down, well fuck all them//
it’s a shame that suicide is the leading cause of death//
there are other ways out, man, always hope for the best//
and you’ll get thru it, do what you want, screw it//
rules were made to be broken so just do it//

some of your rhymes... i couldn't imagine in audio form or vocally spat... but uh... from what i saw... the flow was HELLA-rickety... bumpy as shit cuz some the syllabolic scheme was not there, but oh well, what the fuck am i trying to say, my sorry ass ain't got the guts to drop audio anyway



peace

yeah, it is how you say it to make it fit, but i see what ya mean, thx for the comment

wake up y'all!