aight homie this is the offical rematch we had a good battle last time lets make it another aight here we go

14 bars max respond by 6pm tonite ima drop ma shyt rite quick in about 10 min then u can drop and get the votes started

aight holla bak 1

i'm not sure if this will get moved because you already got 2 battles going but drop anyway i'll drop in about 15 - 20 mins
holla back with your verse

this wont get moved cause i aint got 2 they r both finished the one wit u is over i told them to close it n the other one i told to close to because i won by DQ so its all good aight ima drop ina sec holla bak 1

yo you need to remove your head from your ass cause everything u spit is shit /
u could be an'epileptic fighter' and still your every 'attack' wouldn't 'fit' /

and the only way u cud 'spit hard-core' is if u fucked an apple while erect /
'towering over' this coward ~ u'll need a 'stepladder' to make your 'hits connect' /

you elevatin to my level only makes it easier to drop-u-fool /
kid u cud be a 'big shot director' and still i'd get more 'props-than-u' /

u need to grab your mic cos u still-can't-'hold-your-own' /
dont u know? standing on a kings chair is the only way i cud be-over-thrown / (over throne)

u could 'fuck Triple H doggystyle' and u still wouldn't be 'on top-of-the-game' / (Triple H = The Game)
'drowning' while 'flooded' with insults like you've 'forgotten-your-name' /

i'm glad to 'school' this 'vet' so i took his 'bate-with-a-smile' /
thinkin victory is yours, but like 'Egypt' your in 'a state of denial' /
(Egypt = state-of-the-Nile)

u could be a 'model for the army' and still never 'pose a threat' /
'putting u to sleep' with deep rhymes, as i teach u not to fuck with a vet/

heres my drop

when i'm on the mic you can't speak it's like your toungue-less/
when i'm done you can't breathe it's like your lung-less/

it's like you done dissed me and this is my revenge/
i'll write a verse in ya blood like using red pens/

i don't fear cats, especially queer cats/
if you drop a cd i'll by ten to use as beer mats/

you've beat me once before, but now i'm coming harder/
smarter like Hans Blix i'm gonna disarm ya/
(Hans Blix - UN weapons inspector)

Get the fuck out my throne, clone, the kings home/
you sound ancient like a freestylin' Fred Flintstone/

you can't see me like i'm behind tinted windows/
i'm gonna play you like hoes on Nintendos/

half way through ya verse dudes are like "you bored yet?"/
while my rhymes shine like a 99' Corvette/

you expect to test me with that immature dialect/
your skills are sparse like Iraqi made fighter jets/

holla back, get voting ya'll

Vote: Chaos

X, stick to that style tho you threw hella punchlines, just didnt really hit home and u used dull words

and can everyone please stop saying this punchline.....

"my rhymes shine like a (insert year of car here --> ______ name of car here --> ______ )

i spoke my mind so if someone hates on MY opinion im going to slit their throat and eat their atoms apple with a pitchfork and some tabasco sause.

well.... thats interestin comando

lol uppin' for votes. official score still 0 - 0

uppenn ^^^^^^^^^^^^

uppen 1-0 the end voted hell explain his vote in a little holla bak 1 lets get some votes people aight 1

I voted for X. I felt overall he had the better battle. Chaos you did come at him a lot harder than last battle. But like Comando said, try stayin away from generic lines like the " my rhymes, shine like (insert car here). This isnt the first time you used that line either. Last battle with X you had the line "when i'm on the rhymes, you can't shine like a dirty Porsche" Then this battle you used "while my rhymes shine like a 99' Corvette." Otherwise your battle was tight. Keep up the good work you two.

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1-0 uppen^^^^^^^^^...lets get some lets people holla bak 1

my vote=x
why, cuz his shit was hot! he didn't start off wit its like,or i'm,or i.
i like versitilty, and thats what he brung. u held it down c, but not tight enough.

thanx 4 the votes/advice

Vote=Hard...Because x had about half whackness that he put quotes on and wasn't even metaphors or make sense...I know...I'm intellegent...You had some ok ideas...But worded them all wrong..Good effort...Mad potential...and half PLAYED ASS PUNCHES...Chaos verse was alot more clear.....But his punches wasn't as good


I'm not sure....


I have to go to chaos....Cuz x forced ALOT of punches...nile punch=played...Director/props line=been played....Over thrown=played.....Doin' tripple h doggy style...Was the clearest....Original punch you had..To my knowledge it isn't played...But it was gay as hell....Anytime u make a gay refrence it's played these days...Could have made that punch alot better....

vote:chaos

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