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Old 03-08-03, 12:20 PM   #1
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quick wirte peep the insight

IP: 5153 3B92

runnin
gunnin the cats in my way like nothin
mother fuckin punks better move out my way
im spittin words faster than a lion moves heards
my flow comes smoother than shakespears verbs
with no real topic i rock it to shock it
the crowds mouth agap from this foul mouth rap
i got rhymes for the bad kid
the on who usually gets slapped for talkin back
show him a bat and how to swing it fast
breakin glass with shreiks of momentum
like bruce lee drop kickin in enter the dragon
imagine, my flow is like a roller coaster
comin to fast to grasp like an air force poster
runnin circles around jokesters with microphone holsters
try to roll with this youll just get older
take the hope the life and spirit in your life
take your drive and leave you with a strive to stay alive
come back and with wires live to stick in your side
take your last breathe and the freedom inside
pet it like a puppy and hold and hug
than snap its fucking neck and crush it liek a bug
mice and men can barely tell the difference
some cats are chumps with flows to be simplest
i got hardcore talent you can barely imagine
you cant grasp with a talon with razor sharp balance
no topics to pick no topics to run up
every flow i spit off the fingertips is just somthin to love .... one..
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Old 03-08-03, 12:24 PM   #2
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Good start.............your words don't really match up and it's a lil' off, other than the mispelled words............I say it's aiight..............you must be a newbie...huh?
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