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Old 03-05-03, 08:11 PM   #1
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Live Life Free

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You were the love of my life, The only person I couldn’t fight
The only substance that felt right, After all 12 steps is a long flight.
I didn’t want to let go or give in, show the world, me, from within
I thought you’d help me grin, but you drove me to commit the ultimate sin.
I wish I knew then what I know now, can’t choose drugs over friends.
From the beginning to the end, I never thought the misery would end.
Now the sun and the moon are brighter, my mind and body is tighter,
You know you can’t fight her, she’s the worst thing to have inside ya.
So hold your head up high, getting high is cool, but it ain’t worth dying.
You got to much to leave behind, keep cool and clear your mind.

Don’t give up hope, never act like you own the dope.
It owns you, so don’t provoke a relapse, it’s a slippery slope.
Never show that your weak, that’s how it becomes a DE-man
Show her that you don’t care, show her that you love air.
Tell her that you love to breathe, cause without the breathe of life
You destined to fail, never gonna succeed.
So be all that you can be, never fall again
LIVE LIFE FREE.

Back when I had her for the first time, I never thought she’d control my mind
Three years later, I could barley tell time, Now im writing, never again blind.
The guy told me I’d be alright, have another and you’ll feel just fine,
Apathy and ignorance combined, left me confined and entwined.
In a world without much reason, on my body I commited treason
It didn’t matter what season as long as I was breathing.
I thought I had the world by the balls, but as you know we all will fall
Death of a friend had me climbing walls, padded and others make you feel so small.
But I stood up tall put my self on recall, and now have new shit to be involved
In, life’s eternal sin, is not understanding it, let it go, and you will never get it.
Watch it fly by and you’ll never know shit, So grap yourself and come out of that pit.


Don’t give up hope, never act like you own the dope.
It owns you, so don’t provoke a relapse, it’s a slippery slope.
Never show that your weak, that’s how it becomes a DE-man
Show her that you don’t care, show her that you love air.
Tell her that you love to breathe, cause without the breathe of life
You destined to fail, never gonna succeed.
So be all that you can be, never fall again
LIVE LIFE FREE.



Shit i wrote after some hard times, you know what it's about, let me know what you think though.
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Old 03-06-03, 03:04 AM   #2
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i would like some comments, bad or good dont matter, thanks
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Old 03-06-03, 04:32 AM   #3
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i liked the message you were trying to send, maybe i just cant see it but some of it doesnt seem to rhyme,
"Don’t give up hope, never act like you own the dope.
It owns you, so don’t provoke a relapse, it’s a slippery slope."
that didnt really seem to flow for me, but at least you not rapping about 22's and ice... much props for that... keep rhymin
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Old 03-06-03, 07:46 PM   #4
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thanks appreciate it.
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Old 03-06-03, 10:18 PM   #5
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whole thing was really tight,"Death of a friend had me climbing walls, padded and others make you feel so small." and that line was sick........although in some places i would have to agree with inspire, but it was still phat......keeep it flowing
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