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Old 03-21-03, 09:43 PM   #1
Van Ished
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My Sweetness

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Your words move me swifter than the current of the ocean floor,
and your voice is soothing as it's formed through vocal chords,
absorb me into your world, an everlasting fantasy,
endless in bliss; the glee overwhelming ecstasy,
smooth to the touch, arousing my senses with presence,
I kneel at the sight; your aurora humbles peasants,

You wow me through intellect, none can out-do you,
beautiful without an effort, no other person compares to you,
take me with you where ever it is that you relocate,
so I can retain my sweetness forever in my domain........
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Old 03-22-03, 02:42 AM   #2
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for some reason this remindz me of suhin' SHAKRESPEARE might write and thought I don't ike Mr. Shakez too much I was REALLY fEElin' this wun a lot...nYce vocab in it, you chose tha perfect wordz kiDDo...kEEp it up boo...check out my ish too plz...love...

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Old 03-22-03, 10:45 PM   #3
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thnx

uppin
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Old 03-23-03, 12:23 AM   #4
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i liked this piece...your vocabulary was up there.. i felt this piece...

nice drop...
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