http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=33123 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=32001
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here's the link to my soundclick audio page.. people were say'n they wanted to hear the rhyme I put up here a li'l while ago "What'd you Expect".... so now it's recorded... just follow the link and look for the title... it's the one you said didn't look like it would rhyme... but it does.... peep, and drop some feedback...
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/7/skipofftrackmusic.htm
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here's the text part of this thread.. since it's not really the audio section.....

drugs, drugs, drugs.//
some are good, some aren't bad.//
drugs, drugs, drugs.//
ask your mom or ask your dad.//

come on man, you know mom and dad smoke dope.//
you found their stash under the matress in their room.//
--voice--I did.--end-- yeah man that green stuff.//
it's called marijuana, that bag's worth 40 dollars.//
you should try some of it, just roll up and light some of it.//
you might like some of it, relax, just puff it.//
--voice stoned-- yo man I love it..--end--
I told you so, now would you like to buy some of it.//
just try to come up wit 5 bucks now, and I'll front this.//
it's only weed you don't get addicted to this.//
trust me, I know about this kinda shit.//
just call me when you need more of this.//
my phone number is 416...
a'ight I'll catch you in a little bit.//

this is just one verse I was goin' to make a full song outta it bu I never got around it... I'm supposed to be peer pressure talkin' to this kid... kinda guilty concience theme....

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uppin'.... peep this shit yo...

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Im not just replying because of what you said to mine.... but dawg, alot of this didnt even rhyme. I know its audio but i dont see this working in audio either. Plus its just simple thug & drug shit. Not into that at all. Maybe i should read one of your other pieces

did u listen to the audio... the lyrics aren't for the audio.. I just put those lyrics up so this thread didn't get closed.... check the audio, it actually sounds good...

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uppin'

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didnt check the audio yet.....i cant say i was feelin the text peice..it was short, kinda boring, and like dude said, most of it didnt rhyme....concept was good, but i think you should revamp it and expand on it....