Iight check in. Ya know tha rules if ya dont go read em in bitch slapped.
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i eat mc like you for lunch in this fight you better hope you through the first punch
cause if not your all done cause before the battle started i already won
not enough discretion put into your rhyme just face it cat your gona loose this time
your heads so big that's why im surprised your so dumb
your raps are so whack they stick out like a sore thumb
you don't bring the heat can't stand that shit so i kill what you speak
layin at my feet thought you was all this n that but you to weak
you want to fight me im a heavy you only a light weight
by the time you hit me with one i already hit you wit eight
im to heavy you can't handle the weight like if it was chess you already be in check mate got no were to go nothing to say all you can do is pleed for your dignitay
your not event shit you act like your the golden child
you just aint it act like emineim like you experienced the 8-mile
the shit i spit will leave your ass dead not alive
claim you a balla i got hundreds in my wallet you only carryin a five
im buying bricks of chronic you only scoop up a dime
i got a 9 in my pocket wall yours is empty it's like im in college and your in elementary
got bitches no you can only imagine im fuckin girls that win beauty pageants
up your skills cause if not your ass will be terminated won't be able to
up your bills need to get some help to get yourself situated need to
up your skills cause if not your ass will get degraded
cause in real life cat your just exaggerated
so bow down and take the beaten i told ya'll mother fucker
i was gona kill what you were speakin

chemistry heres the shit its taking you too long i guess thats so you can make sure your rap is phater
nah just fuckin with you dog

yo whats the deal how long does it take you to post this has been here for a while dog and im just wondering why there is no pole how do we know who wins n hurry up it took me like 5 seconds to writethe rhyme im about to just spit another i

i was going to kill what you spoke but nothing was said
im just wondering if your alive or if your dead


chemistry

yo mane i was in jail. give me an hour to key up a verse.
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Ayo...

I'm comin wid a sweeping hand of shadowy fire, taking everything you desire with a quick flick of a guitar wire//1
I admire your confidence but your skills are far too petty, my punches are quick cuttin and sharp like a machette//2
Steady punches feedin knuckles for lunches and puttin your parents panies in bunches all because your dreams gave you hunches//3
You'll be standin with crutches cuz you cant touch this emcee, luck wont get you anywhere but my skill got me doin commercials for pepsi//4
How you gonna get a gurl if your only ride lies on a bus pass, and you use a disguise to hide your nose mass with a fake mustache//5
Lets see, if you were to die suddenly right now with bubbling eyes, would anyone relize that this kid was slow to rise like gay guys watchin porn with women bi's//6
Your style stays sleepin as mine is energized with cafeine, i feel suspended in midair because i'm comatosed from laughing//7
I have a fourty-five, triple grenade launcher, and a glock pistol, while your punk ass is still playin wid dart guns and a toy whistle//8
This your final dismissal you cant break what is harder then a crystal, i'm an official havin tha power to claim war and fire missles//9
Having my airforce and navy commanders take my commandments, no matter how hard you plee dizzy's hand still hits//10
Smuthering you till you crush like ritz crackers and takin your family's life with suicidal missions of back packers, and doin a 9/11 on your town wid space shuttle jackers//11

dont remember tha bar limit but thats all i'm doin.
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uppin fer votes
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Vote=dizzy....His verse was more original...Had a few funny lines..No really nice bars...But a better verse

1ne

Lol watever. 1-0 me uppin
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vote dizzy

he had nice originality a good flow n better punches over all he had a better verse....

vote - dizzy

u know u werent in jail, u were grounded from the computer...

Vote: dizzy, word play stood out, on a scale of 1 to 10 both ur punchlines were between 2-4 tho.

that's already a KO... but I'm-a vote for Dizzy... honestly, chems verse was just weak... I lost interest in the second line, and the rest followed suit.. shit, you really gotta learn ta flow..

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