Nothing twisted, just good ol' rhymin....
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"Hook"
I dispurse feeble verses, with intintions to seek curage;
My mission's meek and worthless, my senses...bleek, I'm nerves;
But I won't give up, instead I'll fight, and believe I'm worth it;
Spittin forbbiden scriptures, 2 verses, repeat the chorus;

I dispurse feeble verses, with intintions to seek curage;
My mission's meek and worthless, my senses...bleek, I'm nerves;
But I won't give up, instead I'll fight, and believe I'm worth it;
As long as I'm blessed with breath, I'll always be determined;

Verse One: The 13th Apostle

Leapin towards an essence unknown, blessin the chrome;
A desease of monumental proportions infected my home;
I was left for the cold, to eat my flesh and my bones;
But i grew up, blew up, and wrote depressions in notes;
Each day that passes, my morality bends more backwards;
Untils my mind's had it, and life seems like an accident;
Distracted by the reaction of God's grace and havok;
Reek it, redeem the hazards, bitches is gay and faggish;
Write down my indescretion, fuck, i learned my lesson;
Seeing my mother happy, is all that my last request-is;
Stuck behind, enemy lines, fucked by sobriety;
Time is of the essence, forgive me God, it's society;

"Hook"
I dispurse feeble verses, with intintions to seek curage;
My mission's meek and worthless, my senses...bleek, I'm nerves;
But I won't give up, instead I'll fight, and believe I'm worth it;
Spittin forbbiden scriptures, 1 verse, repeat the chorus;

I dispurse feeble verses, with intintions to seek curage;
My mission's meek and worthless, my senses...bleek, I'm nerves;
But I won't give up, instead I'll fight, and believe I'm worth it;
As long as I'm blessed with breath, I'll always be determined;

Verse Two: Illacit

Tha elite plan for conquest never ends in glory/
such a concrete man so montrous yet i lend my hand to shorty/
been breathing from my lungs kept alive from tha firey heart that sits inside me/
tha pain conquers my slit wrist an tha blood out comes from inside me/
i dont care if im two-face, you'll never divide me/
never kill my reign plus you'll never deny me/
unpredictable shit most of tha time i even surprise myself/
diggin deep for that one line every breath until im demised of health/
my eyes'll increase in size as i sit back a rise/
look at shit through my perspective, you'll prolly sit back and die/
at heart im poetic, watch it leak through tha pen/
i signify intelligence im unique with tha pen/
create my own rap physique with tha pen/
fill up loose leafs every week with tha pen/
im tha last man standing you lookin kinda weak at tha end/
i got tha ill technique with tha pen/
Knowledge is King call me a "geek" with tha pen i speak with tha pen/
rap is my hunger all i gotta say is Bon-a-Piet with tha pen/

"Hook"
I dispurse feeble verses, with intintions to seek curage;
My mission's meek and worthless, my senses...bleek, I'm nerves;
But I won't give up, instead I'll fight, and believe I'm worth it;
Spittin forbbiden scriptures, 1 verse, repeat the chorus;

I dispurse feeble verses, with intintions to seek curage;
My mission's meek and worthless, my senses...bleek, I'm nerves;
But I won't give up, instead I'll fight, and believe I'm worth it;
As long as I'm blessed with breath, I'll always be determined;
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Holla......

P.e.a.c.e.

wow...sick collabo.Yall both brought tha heat real serious.I would luv to hear this ish in audio over "patiently waiting" or sumthin. Both ya multis,metties,vocab,and story-tellin.I wish more collabs would be like dis...WORTH LISTENIN,take a lesson kids.Stay ^
-Avi

ill....first verse was better though....like the hook...

rat'n.......9/10

Thank you for the replies, and this will be done in audio as soon as i get the equipment...9/10? almost there...next piece is 10/10....

P.e.a.c.e.

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P.e.a.c.e

Tight collabo man, both your styles seem to be similar in concept and flow... therfore it made the transition from u to his pretty smooth... The vocab was hot for both of yous too, good flow and rhymes... complex at times but understandable too...

-1-

Thank you for the reply....

P.e.a.c.e.

that shit is hot.
Nuff said.
Peace.